I may be stubborn
but I'm also very proud
as I watch out the windows
watching big dark clouds
the rain is coming
of that, I am sure
thunder and lightning
breaking down my door
the darkness has a way
of letting itself in
no matter where we hide
or indeed, where we leave our sins
but I know she is coming
she is coming she is
to soothe all my pain
covering me
in feathered wings.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: She's back.
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments6
I loved this poem that serves as a metaphor to me of mood and hope and the darkness is taken away with feathered wings that can soar above it most lovely
Yes it's like a thought of triumph so to speak with my angel used as cover, thank you so much dear sorrenbarret I also did a recorded reading but unfortunately can't find an easy way to post it here. Humbled you have enjoyed this my dear friend. 🌹 Thank you. 🌹
Love it, Teddy. Great imagery.
Thank you so much dear Jerry. 🌹
Beautiful work.
Thank you dearest Thomas. 🌹
Your angel will always be there for you Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy. 🌹
Great metaphor and a lovely poem that gives hope, my friend. Well done, Teddy. Another fave. 🌹👏
Awe, thank you dearest Tristan. 🌹
You are most welcome, my friend. Forgive my tardiness. I pulled my back out earlier this week. It's been hell since. Slowly recovering. I've had all I can do just to post poems! 😭🤣
this is so full of positivity even in the midst of the darkness - yes there is always light at the end of the tunnel, and your angel will always steer you through it
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB, she always does...🌹
that's so reassuring
glad for you...
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