In My Heart I Cry.
Visibly you cannot see bruises.
They can be felt on the inside.
I cannot say look can you see.
They are trapped inside of me.
I sense my heart doesn't work.
Sometimes think I'm going to die.
I listen no it's still beating okay.
Though this is where I always cry.
To the world I am a normal man.
Like the others doing what I can.
The mask I wear fits me so well.
I’m hurt but you could never tell.
So truly pointless that would be.
It is difficult to say can't you see.
Pain flows through my aged veins.
For sure, it’s me that failed again.
Trailing pieces of a broken heart.
Consumed and then torn apart.
There are no tears in my eyes.
It’s in my broken heart that I cry.
Tobani / Dec / 2024
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A broken heart can only be seen through its symptoms of tears, lethargy and facial features. Like a fever revealing an infection it needs attention. An excellent metaphor and nicely written.
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Well this is quite heart breaking. A mournful cry of a broken heart.Very powerful
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People most usually judge by appearances so we find it most useful to look the part on the surface level. Sad truth🕊️🙏🏻
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Most welcome 👍🏻And thank you for supporting my poems as well 🙏🏻🕊
You are very welcome
My heart has been broken so many times, I think I have lost some the pieces. Man, this hits home again, Tobani! Great work, my friend! 🌹👏💔❤️🩹
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You are most welcome!
Not sure if keeping all that grief suppressed is a good thing. Why no tears? You are allowed.
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We all wear masks in differing situations in our lives Tobani. May your heart be healed.
Andy
Thank you that is so kind, enjoy the rest of your day
such a soul searing and poignant message
beautiful
Thank you kindly, have a great weekend
you too..
Thank you
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