Black Friday

Tony36

Twas Black Friday and all through the store

Big sales

Big sales

Big sales galore

 

Pushing

Shoving

Being rammed with carts

Floor personnel duck out of the way

While the store falls a part

 

Screaming 

Shouting

Fist fights and more

People trying for that big buy

Going for the big score

 

When the day's over

The whole store a mess

Still have employees standing

So we call this year a success

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 15th, 2025 08:39
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • arqios

    Haha, so true. We try our best to stay home on Black Friday, it’s crazy enough out there🙏🏻🕊️

    • Tony36

      Thank you

      • arqios

        Welcome Tony; thank you as well for you valued support of my work🙏🏻🕊️

      • sorenbarrett

        Commercialism at its best. Christmas the time of giving when all are wondering what they are receiving. A fun read Tony

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • 2781

          What's in a name?

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • hzugman

            Good write Tony. The madness of senseless purchasing.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Goldfinch60

              Black Fridays are a pain and best avoided Tony. LOL

              Andy

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • Tom Dylan

                Love this! Really captured the chaos of the sales! Nice one.

                • Tony36

                  Thank you



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