and so, after all
a rose wouldn't be a rose
if she didn't glow.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: 5/7/5 syllables senryu- emotion.
- Category: Love
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Teddy on first read and looking at the picture I took this to be a flower but then upon thinking about the word glow and seeing the note senryu emotion i thought no this is the name of a person. Clever use of ambiguity to create a dual image. Very nicely done my friend
Good morning my dear sorrenbarret, as always you fill my page with grace and encouragement, every so often I like to practice my senryu, it's surely one of my most challenging and favourite forms, also my favourite flower and of course the name of so many who are special. 🌹 Thank you so much dear friend. 🌹
Wonderful Senryu, Teddy. The beauty and allure of a rose in 17 syllables and a title...working well as a metaphor for a person. Excellent job, my friend! 🌹👏
I believe all women have the potential to be a rose, thank you dearest Tristan. 🌹
Indeed, my friend. They do! A powerful poem! 🌹
So true, we have a wonderful flowering rose bush in our garden at the moment Teddy.
Andy
So lovely to know, thank you dear Andy. 🌹
Indeed!
🌹 indeed.
being a rose, i feel she would - because she is the queen of flowers - but then the glow does add to its beauty for sure
Yes beauty, from both a flower rose and a lady rose 🌹 thank you dear NafisaSB 🌹
most welcome - wishing you a great day ,and a lovely weekend
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