Notice of absence from arqios
🕊 🙏🏻 often and again, away 🙏🏻🕊️
🕊 🙏🏻 often and again, away 🙏🏻🕊️
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ...or first snow of the season ❄️ a bit of change in tone, impetus and approach... please do partake🕊️🙏🏻
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A preliminary Fave 🤩 this is a harbinger of sorts. May the winds shift favourable to travel. 🧳🙏🏻🕊️
Hear it is the start of summer and all is yellow and green arqios.
Andy
The curious features of our home planet 🌍 planet🙏🏻🕊️
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the snow-dusted peaks. A lovely, serene start to the season in Thredbo!
Yes indeed. Then as the cruel winter bites in the lustre quickly fades🙏🏻🕊️⛷️🏔️
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Reminds of the one time i went skiing, absolutely hated it, the most fake environment I have ever been in, that said this is a lovely write, with lovely images of the first virgin snow falling, enjoyed the read
That is a very valid and truthful angle! Then as the lure for more income generation 🙏🏻🕊️
Well when you put it like that, It's beautiful. Full marks for the poetry.
Once upon a time I experienced Thredbo in winter..............
Words can prettify and also fall short deep on the actual experience. We almost got caught in that early 2000 disaster, if circumstances weren’t such. Then we had the mine disaster in Tassie and the sandstorms and drought…. Crazy times…
Got that right. My experience a combo of PL's above plus a futile attempt to get chains on wheels stuck by a slushy road and with frozen hands.
Oh the ones just before frostbite sets in! That is quite horrid indeed.... perhaps why I decided to paint a rosier picture... must be in denial, I is 🙏🏻🕊️
😂Nah , not denial - it's poetry innit?
hehe.. that it is😂
Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into winter can feel this change in my memories of winter's onset. Loved it
It does alter memories, doesn't it!? Thanks Soren🙏🏻🕊️
A wonderful poem. A great tribute to the first snows of Thredbo.Well done compadre
The news item last week on the event sparked the Muse/ Thanks amigo🙏🏻🕊️
Your poem is lovely! It beautifully captures the quiet arrival of winter with vivid imagery and a peaceful tone.
Thanks so much Salvia, arrivals can and should bring blessings. Much appreciated🕊️🙏🏻
so beautifully writtenc- can imagine the tranquility of the scene before the hordes pour in and the rush starts.
thanks for sharing
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