Ancient Roots
The tip of each root twists neatly
where earth holds it so sweetly,
its tendrils—like fingers grown
deep— cradle soil, embrace
and keep the moisture
tight with anchored
might, ground to
crown, renown,
tree.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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This is quite a beautiful tribute to the humble tree.Trees really are God's master piece.Well done mi amigo. I really enjoyed reading
Humble but oh so much more... just learnt that the majority of the Earth's oxygen is formed in the Ocean and not by trees, bummer! Good one compadre🙏🏻🕊️
The rhyme, meter, image, metaphor, all these not sure what more but there is something special about this poem that grabs me and for that unidentifiable element that identifies all great poems from the normal this gets a fave.
Like those squares on the periodic table that are absolutely blank! 🙏🏻🕊️
A lovely write of an essential part of our planet and our existance, I dont know the name of the style/lay out of the write, but I like it, enjoyed the read
A concrete of shape poem it has been described. 🙏🏻🕊️
Wow, what a delight to read this text. Thank you so much! Regards
Thanks Damaso, that is so refreshing to hear🕊️🙏🏻
Yes , Trees are something you never tire of.
I Love when it's Windy and the Branches wave, and there's that Wonderful Sound like Waves breaking on a Shore. Good one.
mmmm.... that is the ultimate... cheers Kevin🕊️🙏🏻
Those ancient roots have brought us to where we are now arqios.
Andy
And those by the river bank are quite breathtaking too🕊️🙏🏻
You have woven this poem as the reader's mind is woven into its etherial form as if to become one with the poetry of these ancient roots. The true sign of a great poet. Outstanding.
Kind regards,
Tony.
Quite humbly honored by your much valued words and estimation; thanks Tony 🕊️🙏🏻
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