Will you come and journey with the author,
traversing time and space, imagination -
of things real or conjured in the mind
when the wattle blossoms dance in the wind,
the birdcalls and the dingo's howling....
in that hour of phrases catching, we shall
see the wonder of life itself unfolding...
Through the hush of dawn’s slow breathing,
we tread the worn paths of longing,
where the earth hums beneath bare feet-
stories layered leaf upon fallen leaf,
whispering of forgotten hands
that shaped the contours of this land
before names were written down.
Beyond the bend where shadows linger,
where water carves its quiet etching,
the air thickens with memories unclaimed-
voices once carried along by wind,
folded into the murmuring gum trees,
waiting for new tongues to set them free:
voices launched into time’s unraveling thread.
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Author:
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- Published: June 1st, 2025 01:35
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Comments12
This is so wonderful. It has a true Aussie flavour.So many powerful images created here.I really enjoyed reading
Thanks compadre, so glad there is enjoyment to be had here. ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
( whispering of forgotten hands
that shaped the contours of this land
before names were written down.)
Epic lines followed by a most beautifully painted set of images in the next stanza. A piece of work that causes the breast to swell in awe over a past that seems to extend out of dream time. A beautiful write and a fave
Thanks Soren. May its attributes touch as many as can be possible.๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Some lovely lines painting a wonderful image of part their homeland, very enjoyable read
Thank you PL; you are greatly appreciated ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
You are very welcome
Unchanging which isnโt strange
I prefer the stability.
As do I, yet others take on a more random stance, it appearsโฆ
Well written, your poem "A Poet's Bush Call" explores themes of connection to nature, memory, and the passage of time. It invites the reader to embark on a journey through the natural landscape, emphasizing the beauty and complexity of life as it unfolds in the environment. The subject matter revolves around the Australian bush, the experiences of the land, and the stories embedded within it, highlighting the relationship between humanity and nature, and the importance of remembering those who have come before us.
Thanks most kindly ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
A great bit of Aussie culture and a wish for the future. Loved it.
Thanks Phil๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Gorgeous and so deliciously laden with imagery which sets the imagination on fire as the poet's extended hand, with such an invite fit to tantalize, is taken hesitantly, whirling the reader off into an adventure such as we never dreamed. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a wonderfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Many many many thanks ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
What a wonderful poem, my friend. I took the journey and, though I've never been to Australia, it felt as if I were there in the bush with you. Well done! ๐๐น
Thanks T for the welcome back๐๏ธ๐๐ป
You are welcome. Glad you are!
Powerful work.
Thanks Thomas๐๏ธ๐๐ป
I once read that Australia is a remaining fragment of a much bigger continent. I could feel that in this poem. Epic!
Wouldnโt surprise me should that be so๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Wonderful words arqios, those words will be forever in the ether.
Andy
Thanks Andy, very much appreciated ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
This communiquรฉ from Down Under certainly got 'em going, Mate - I'll endorse every word.
Itโs a rarity and in that sense needful; many thanks, mate๐๏ธ๐๐ป
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