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Mary’s Fun (3).
Mary had decided to go out jogging.
Breasts were bouncing and bobbing.
Mary tripped on the curb in the street.
As Mary fell her bra strap broke free.
Now Poor Mary’s eyes are throbbing.
Large overweight Mary had a big fall.
She had to wait for the doctor to call.
Mary your huge weight I am appalled.
Mary said I thought I was quite small.
As she ate another Greggs sausage roll.
Tobani Jan 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
Thank you
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
Thank you
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it's not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
They are both becoming a disaster, thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
Indeed! LOL! And I am loving it! You are most welcome. You too!
Good fun write Tobani.
Don't mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
They are the Countries Addiction, Thank you for the feedback, have a great day
Yes, now it's Mary's turn; unless of course I missed something.🙏🏻🕊️
In truth they are both a little unlucky in life, Thank you for your feedback, have a great day
Then you are doing them a great kindness. 🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you
Most welcome PL🙏🏻🕊️
You're hilarious. So this is Harry's princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
I am sure they love each other!!!, thank you for your feedback, hope you have a wonderful week
Nice one.
Thank you, very much appreciated
Lol I'm not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
Thank you for your kind feedback, hope you have a great week
Trying to visualize the scene- but what I see is Mary reaching for that roll - lol
Enjoyed the write
Thank you, have a great weekend
you too -enjoy the weekend
Thank you
I was about to laugh, but on second read I had to lose it. The poem reminded me of a book I read around 30 years back - Time of Desecration by Alberto Moravia. Mary's character is eerily reminiscent of one of tbe prominent characters in the book. An overweight girl who couldn't control her urge of eating due to depression.
A thought provoking poem in a deceptively simple language - to me it's high poetey.
Thank you for your kind feedback, hope you have a wonderful week
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