my poetic side

arqios


Words collect like morning dew on leaves—
offered, absorbed, refracted—
a quiet exchange in the rhythms of being.


Voices scatter across a vast terrain
gently meeting with fierce exclamations,
each one feeding, each one fed.


Community thrives beneath unseen threads
binding both fragile and the bold,
roots deepening in shared soil.

 

 

 

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  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful, and we are indeed a community full of all sorts of souls and when we are here we are all accepted and respected. ๐ŸŒน

    • arqios

      Good to have such a place in an otherwise contrary world ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

    • sorenbarrett

      This poem has roots that go deep. The one that I followed took me to the origin of language and what would society or community be without it. No poetry, no history, no learning accumulated, no technology.. Words the primary means of sharing. You hide well in metaphor the that like roots covered under ground compose much of the tree's meaning. A fave for the depth of this poem

      • arqios

        As far back as the first etches and scratches of dwelling walls and caves ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

      • David Wakeling

        This is delightful to read. I particularly liked the 'Voices scatter across a vast terrain" Very powerful images here

        • arqios

          Thanks mate, itโ€™s a song of the heart to our shared spot in the digital-scape๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

        • arqios

          Thanks for the Fave @Soren๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

        • Poetic Licence

          Without words and art we would know nothing of any history, we would never have developed as human beings and we could never learn about each other. This site is a proper box of all sorts, so many different life experiences, cultures, history, events, festivals, different views which makes it a wonderful place to reveal your words, enjoyed the read

          • arqios

            Most heartily agreed, thank you so much ๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good write, arqios.

              • arqios

                Thanks so much Jerry. You are most appreciated๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

              • arqios

                Thanks for the like @Cheeky Missy ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                It takes all kinds and, despite the kinds I don't like, I wouldn't change a thing about it...even them. Though I do wish they would change themselves! ๐Ÿคฃ Humans need community and we make community. It's a beautiful thing overall, hiccups aside. Wonderful write, my friend.

                • arqios

                  Thanks amigo๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    You are most welcome mon ami!

                  • Kevin Hulme

                    Fine way of describing MPS. It's a being but you can't touch it. You have a good way with words ,
                    Like Wot eye wood like two bee.

                    • arqios

                      To let be or knot two bees, thatโ€™s thee questionedโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                    • MendedFences27

                      Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well. I loved it.

                      • arqios

                        Many thanks dear friend ๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                      • Tony36

                        Excellent write

                        • arqios

                          Hey Tony, good to hear from you! Thank you very much๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                          • Tony36

                            You're welcome

                          • John Prophet

                            So true.. nice work.
                            John

                            • arqios

                              Thanks John, much appreciated ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป
                              arqios

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Those words show life in our community here arqios.

                              Andy

                              • arqios

                                Thanks Andy๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                              • Mottakeenur Rehman

                                Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profoundโ€”like roots deepening in shared soil. A beautiful reflection on connection and the rhythms of being.

                                • arqios

                                  Thanks dear friend. You are so much appreciated and your kind words an elixir to the soul. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                                • NafisaSB

                                  you have explained the interaction amongst those who contribute here so well..
                                  thanks for sharing

                                  • arqios

                                    Thank you safina, may it continue and increase in the coming seasons๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                                    • NafisaSB

                                      Amen
                                      i second your wish



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