Soulmates don't find eachother
they have forever been entwined
Where there are ancient walls of time's past
there will also be treasures
If the moon can rise from the ashes of the sun
the sun can also rise from the ashes of grief
When traveling the world
only with deaf ears
must you take advice from a recluse
there will be no greater lesson
When your soul cries, listen to it
the tears will either drown you
or keep you hydrated from drought
Having empathy for another soul
shows your selflessness and compassion.
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A most lovely set of adages set in wisdom if those with deaf ears will only listen. Very nice Teddy
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret ๐น
True words, eloquently stated, my friend!
Sorry to be largely absent from MPS, but I am writing nothing but songs at the moment. I haven't written a poem in months. Also, my youngest sister is very ill, so I don't feel like writing anything right now. Hope you are keeping well.
Thank you for being here today then ๐นalways thrilled to see you dearest Robert, sending the biggest of hugs to all. ๐น
Wonderful, Teddy! Let those who have ears to hear, listen.. ๐๐น
Good morning dear Tristan thank you so much. ๐น
Teddy, from 1 to 6, I loved them all, especially 1, 3,4,5,6, but the first one above all. There is wisdom, hope, and knowledge. This is definitely a favorite. - Phil A.
Thank you so much dear Phil, my pleasure, truly humbled you have enjoyed this dear friend. ๐น
Such truly wonderful words Teddy, soulmates are always together.
Andy
Some get more than one! Thank you my dear Andy. ๐น
Beautiful work, sweet Teddy.
Thank you dearest Thomas. ๐น
not one but a barrage of good messages .
maybe souls are entwined for the lucky ones- maybe there's a new one for those who keep experimenting, and changing partners in different stages of life
would a recluse be able to give proper guidance, not having interacted with others and gained experience ?
agree - when your soul cries - give it both your ears, and your heart and mind, and listen to its pleas
Finally empathizing with another does show your compassion..
great job done here
Dearest NafisaSB so I believe that those who have a soulmate are forever entwined not all of us have this and those who do may for many reasons never know them. There are others who are lucky to find more than one, yes for the recluse it is pointless giving advice if one has never seen outside in more ways than one. Thank you so much, I'm so glad you have enjoyed my scribbles ๐น
they are more than scribbles - they are words spoken from your heart, and captured on paper, so will stay for eternity
have many more such productive days..Amen
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