You hate me
I love you
You despise me
I love you
You want to see me
Fall
Fail
Hurt
Broken
I want to see you
Fly
Succeed
Be built up
You try and you try to bring me down
You can't change me
No matter how hard you try
I am still who I am
And nothing you say or do will change that
That's right NOTHING
Go ahead do your worst
It will do you no good
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Tony is this one that you reworked? It sounds very similar to another of yours recently. Well done and asserting ones right to be who one is. A lovely work.
Thank you, and yes it is a rework
I remember your poems Tony
It's a beautiful reality, isn't it, though?! Even the feeble attempts to change myself fail. Only the LORD can change us. Yet we assail our fellows and painfully try to change them! Ridiculous. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. So far as I've seen, there's not a woman who marries without the unconscious thought she'll change him afterwards.
Thank you
A lovely write of standing up for who you are and want to be, why do people go to so much effort trying to change someone I'll never know, enjoyed the read
Thank you
You are very welcome
Excellent, my friend. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Best regards!
Thank you
Stay positive in life Tony, it works for me.
Andy
Thank you
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