Notice of absence from Tom Dylan
Sorry if there is a delay in responses. Sometimes life gets in the way. As John Lennon said, life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
Sorry if there is a delay in responses. Sometimes life gets in the way. As John Lennon said, life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.
I feel the current pull and drag me,
jerking me this way and that,
I tilt my head back and gasp for air,
cold water fills my ears.
Life’s waves and worries and stresses
crash over my head and push me
down towards the dark depths beneath.
I kick and thrash as hard as I can
fighting against the current and the tide,
still gasping for air, can feel myself going under,
uncertain how long I can hang on for.
Poetry grabs my wrists and pulls me towards the shore,
her grip soft but firm, reassuring.
As I lie coughing and spluttering on the cold sand
poetry gently sits me up,
wrapping a blanket tightly around me,
telling me I’ll be okay.
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Tom Dylan (
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- Published: June 10th, 2025 02:34
- Comment from author about the poem: A poem about how writing and poetry is there when things get tough.
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Comments9
I have been saved by that same lifeguard. Dark cold waters with strong undertows and currents pull on the sea of life. A great metaphor Tom
Glad we are literally in the same boat, my friend. Really appreciate your comments.
Totally relate to this as it is my saviour, enjoyed the read
Thanks so much, PL. Really appreciated, mate.
You are very welcome
Excellent write Tom
Thanks a lot, mate. Appreciated.
You're welcome
Hmm. Now THIS is a charming bit of metaphorical delineation. Me likes. Gorgeously expressed and winsomely rendered with exquisite imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks so much, Missy. Really appreciated.
You nailed it. I relate.
Thanks a lot, my friend. Really appreciated.
Poetry gives a damn good 'Kiss of Life'.
Well Said.
Thanks a lot, Kevin. Really appreciated.
Writing keeps us alive Tom, keep writing.
Andy
Spot on, Andy. Completely agree. Cheers, Tom.
i couldnt relate more !!fantastic!!!!
Thanks so much for your comments. Really appreciated.
yes - poetry does help us survive the daily trials and tribulations - you pour your heart out, and feel release
beautifully explained
Thanks a lot for your comments, Nafisa. Really appreciated.
always welcome - keep composing, and sharing..have a great day
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