Where Does Time Go?

Goldfinch60



Where does it go?

Where does time go?

The doctor asked the question,

“Have you ever smoked?”

Yes, I had smoked

Smoked very heavily.

I remember the day,

The day that I stopped,

The day I gave up smoking

In October nineteen eighty-two,

It was October sixteenth in that year,

It was at my nephew’s wedding

And that date has stuck with me.

But then the thought came to me

“How long ago!”

Blimey, it was forty-three years ago,

It seemed a lifetime!

Where does this time go?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 19th, 2025 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Where did those 43 years go!
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: MendedFences27, Damaso
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  • orchidee

    For us two, 43 years is like, say, 43 hours, with us being millions of years old. lol. Yes, 1980's stuff appears in antiques shows these days.

  • Doggerel Dave

    For me after many many tries finally gave up 27/12/86 the day I returned to Australia. It took a change of country to achieve success.
    At least you have had them (those years). Need I add that if you had continued with those smokes.........
    Your good health, Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Well done Dave. Yes If we had stayed smoking we may have lost those years but we are still here and hopefully with many years to come.

      Andy

    • arqios

      Indeed, where does it go!? And there’s so much of it still coming our way🙏🏻🕊️

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true arqios. Yes there is stillmuch more to come.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Wow that's a triumph for sure. 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          It surely is Teddy, thank you.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Time is a slippery and ephemeral ghost that is hard to grasp. Where does it go indeed

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true soren, time can be hard to fathom sometimes but we are still here with more time to come.

            Andy

          • David Wakeling

            I ask the same question. Time just goes so quickly we cant keep up.A frank and honest poem.Well done

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you David, where does the time go?

              Andy

            • Poetic Licence

              In the blink of an eye there's more of your past than your future, enjoyed the read

              • Goldfinch60

                Very true Tobani but I hope I still have a long future to come.

                Andy

                • Poetic Licence

                  And may that be

                • Jerry Reynolds

                  Well written, Andy. Great question. Far more of it in the past than left in the future.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Jerry.

                    Andy

                  • MendedFences27

                    Andy, I felt this one. For me it was my 21'st birthday, so. 60 years ago. What I remember are the tortuous few weeks that followed. It was well worth it. Thanks for the memory. - Phil A.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Well done Phil. Thank you for your kind words.

                      Andy

                    • Tony36

                      Excellent write Andy

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Tony.

                        Andy

                        • Tony36

                          You're welcome

                        • John Prophet

                          Was not familiar with those fellows. Did a little research. Pleasant sound they had. Nice write Andy.
                          John

                          • Goldfinch60

                            They were a duo that I remember from my younger days and were very popular. Thank you John.

                            Andy



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