Upon horizons stretched in endless hue,
The longest day unfolds its golden light.
Through verdant fields and skies of brilliant blue,
Its hours linger, banishing the night.
The sun ascends, a monarch on its throne,
Bestowing warmth upon both land and sea.
Each fleeting moment feels a world alone,
Yet sings of time’s relentless melody.
The whispering breeze, soft as a lover's sigh,
Dances ‘neath shadows of the ancient trees.
The day grows bold, as twilight waits nearby,
Its brilliance fading with the evening breeze.
Though fleeting hours give way to dusk's embrace,
The longest day leaves memories to trace.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: June 21st, 2025 01:12
- Comment from author about the poem: Just another about the summer solstice.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 24
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy, Doggerel Dave
Comments9
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Gorgeous poem. ๐น
Most kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Opposites attract arqios, Thank you.
Andy
Yes! Thanks Andy๐๏ธ๐๐ป
A most beautiful sonnet Andy that gives images of a warm long summer day that lazily lingers into the night. Loved it
Thank you soren, much appreciated.
Andy
And what a cracker weather wise it was, enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani, much appreciated.
Andy
You are very welcome
This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo
So very kind David, thank you.
Andy
Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.
So kind Jerry, thank you.
Andy
You and your bleedin' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good 'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.
Thank you Dave, in six months time you will be moaning about the heat as I am now.. LOL
Andy
Turning into a prophet in your old age, Andy?๐
Excellent write Andy
Most kind Tony, thank you.
Andy
You're welcome
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