drive on by

arqios

 

steeped in dust and dying daylight,

this country forgets how far is not far

until walking becomes waiting

for a bus that never

did come.

 

we do not live in towns

we stretch between rivers and roadhouses.

a bloke might find work three hours gone

(assuming he’s got wheels) else

he's just a bloke with boots worn out

before payday.

 

once they saddled their livelihoods—

muscle and hooves,        —tethered

to the promise of feed & fence.

now? we ride pistons,

we gallop petrol.

 

a car isn’t luxury—

it’s your permission to try.

and i— flat broke & half-mad with tomorrow—

need mine as if yesterday were waiting

at the end of the drive.

 

 

 

 

.

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 11th, 2025 06:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: needed a car yesterday, yesteryear getting all the ducks in a row for my own car, it's hard for a cowboy without a steed.... scabbing rides to work ain't fun and ubering is quite dear.... my dear so who's gonna drive me home, tonight? .
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, sorenbarrett, Damaso, Tristan Robert Lange, My Boy Ryngkhlem
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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    great write

  • arqios

    thanks for that Fave @sorenbarrett

  • sorenbarrett

    I felt this write Cryptic. I've been without a ride. Thumbed when young until one time a guy didn't want to let me out. Finally dropped me further down the road than I was to start with. Have caught buses that came too late, ubered that emptied my pocket and sometime didn't show up, walked till exhausted. This poem is full of great metaphors as well that each one fit like a glove. It smelled of country vast and expansive and the poverty that I've known. It was as familiar as an old pair of worn boots. A fave

    • arqios

      Thank you Soren, the old pair of boots have companion blisters and thickened skin ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

    • arqios

      Thanks @Cheeky_Missy for the Fave ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

      • Cheeky Missy

        You're welcome, my pleasure. What's personally frustrating is my inability to recommend a working solution since I used the Uber plea in all honesty to get my first car but don't know whom to recommend the speaker to since this is from both another continent as well as a different nation altogether.
        Superbly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

        • arqios

          And now with the news of water run engines no less! Greta wouldnโ€™t mind๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

        • Tony Grannell

          Have wheels will travel, no money, no wheels, have feet will blister, by bus if it ever arrives. The pangs of transport in today's world, just to make a wage. The obstacles of life for a poor honest poet. Down to earth and spot on in four fine stanzas.

          Wishing you the best of luck,

          Tony.

          • arqios

            Thanks Tony, much appreciated as always๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

          • Poetic Licence

            Very enjoyable read, I cant driv anymore but have great local transport, I can appreciate for some it's a nightmare not having a car, nicely written

            • arqios

              Thanks for understanding. And yes, with great public transport, life takes on a more productive stance. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • Doggerel Dave

                'This country' being of course Australia where I don't own a car. But for anyone outside your big cities or even in the outer suburbs four wheels are no luxury, no lifestyle choice - the motor vehicle an absolute necessity.
                Problem in a nutshell (poetic nutshell) mate.

                • arqios

                  Yup... cheats the long and short of it! Cheers DD๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                • Bella Shepard

                  We are indeed dependent on vehicular transport in the world of today, and you describe it incredibly well. Being of a certain age I ponder the day when I will no longer be able to drive, and that's a scary thought. Hope that you get your wheels none too soon. Good write!

                  • arqios

                    Thanks so much, I hope soon as well rather than too little too late ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    I love your form hereโ€”the bold first lines anchor each stanza like mile markers, giving the whole piece this subtle forward motion. And the closing hits especially hardโ€ฆthe quiet desperation of needing a way out just to survive. Stark, beautiful, and hauntingly familiar. Brilliant work, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

                    • arqios

                      It got real for a moment there and you picked up on that. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        Indeed. Glad I did, my friend...but that is due to your brilliant writing! Well done!

                      • David Wakeling

                        I know the feeling here.Depending on a car is filled with trouble. They always let you down .A powerful poem with a despairing question.Very honest.

                        • arqios

                          Oh indeed, the number of things that go wrong and the cha-ching at the till that accompanies that can be horrendous. Oh by the way, my first car was bought at a Wakeling car yard. Any relations?

                          • David Wakeling

                            Yes if it was Paul Wakeling Motors in Campbelltown we both had the same great great grandfather but not the same great grandfather.

                            • arqios

                              There thee be! I worked at the Campbelltown dealership for a year and a bit, lol. Strange world. ๐Ÿฅธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Fine words arqios, I would drive you home but I am a couple of miles away from you.

                              Andy

                              • arqios

                                Thatโ€™s just outside the extra mile so itโ€™s all good, Andy; wonโ€™t hold you to it๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                              • My Boy Ryngkhlem

                                • arqios

                                  Hey there, how have you been? Busy with assessments? Good to see you around ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿปthanks for dropping in๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

                                  • My Boy Ryngkhlem

                                    Heyyy! It's been so long. I missed you! I'm super excited- life's been amazing lately! I just got into college, and I feel incredibly blessed. How have you been?



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