I do return sometimes... occasionally...
Or Orry as I sometimes like to call,
Sleek and modern, we’re here for the long haul.
Room’s corner is the perfect place to sit;
Fulfils my every knowledge deficit.
Comes with all the virtual bells and whistles
On call just beneath my screen’s pixels;
Programmes if you wish to be technical,
Word and Outlook utilised and practical -
Tended by Spell Checker and Copilot,
Which try to add polish I’d almost forgot.
Spell checker is a very active app,
But needs attention to filter out the crap;
While copilot is enthusiastic but awaits a request -
To polish my prose, something I would like?
This I can do myself – so go take a hike.
Copilot remains quite enthusiastic,
Ready to poeticise, quite elastic;
Keen to write poetry in any form -
Love, death, the moon, even lost in a storm.
Copilot the latest in freebee AI -
More powerful models are ready to buy.
The age of poetic robots is near -
Or could you believe they are already here?
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Author:
Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: And so am I. Also has a connection to my previous pin 'Fraternity'.
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Yes Dave it is hard to tell who is real and who is not, what poem is written by a human and what is artificial written by AI. Don't have to worry about my poems though they are not good enough to be AI.
Going to sell AI poems as better than yours?
Self put done was always in my humor bag. I watched too much Rodney Dangerfield
I think its a certainty they are already here, personally don't understand the point of using AI to write a poem, I write what I feel and think and thats what I enjoy, how does AI do that, enjoyed the read
Got that right with respect to my writing, Tobani. its just that I want to know whom I\'m responding to and would like to know there is an authentic person there.
Thanks for your support.
Absolutely, you are very welcome
And so am I Dave.
Andy
Thanks Andy.
I thought this was gonna be about a shopping centre locally here in UK - The Oracle. Do ya know it?! lol.
No I don't, however as I'm always eager to acquire new information, please feel free to enlighten me.
But BEFORE You do, is there the slightest chance that you might consider this masterwork in it's entirety and provide a considered opinion with respect to content and quality?
It's a very human longing, and an important one. Knowing who's one the other end of a conversation gives depth to response's meaning and emotional texture to exchange; especially in poetry where so much is personal and could be intricately layered. To be a person in its core essence and engagement brings meaning to attention, curiosity and care. A human listening deeply, responding with thoughtfulness and sincerity- every word crafted coming from the depths of where poems issue from and inhabit, in nuance, mood and intention. A human with a living heartbeat and a messy backstory, a longing we hold on to. That should guarantee connection, a chance at understanding and genuine engagement, an authentic space worth cohabiting between "like" individuals. I guess we pick and choose at what's available and presented to us. Will go to "Fraternity" now and deep dive.
Thanks for all that, mate; agreed.
If you ever surface after Fraternity, and by that I mean the comments thread and not really the originating pin, I'd be interested to see what you think, should you feel so inclined. But don't feel obligated.
Google informed my Gmail they were generously giving me free use of their AI; that innocent offer was an insidious notice I'd thereafter be plagued until my mind offered to vanish. Trying to be rid of the faceless devil was as all attempts at exorcism--a failure and not allowed. It's been chancy ever since. You've apparently pulled off your usual despite all the feigned assistance. Charming and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Over the course of something like three pins here around this topic (not just mine), you've achieved a fine balance and for that I can only thank you for the particular support you have afforded me. Go well Missy.
I'm not a lot of use with making detailed comments.
Bu what I want to know is - did I see ya at The Oracle in town in my part of the UK? lol.
Second entry here on same question, Orchi having a 'Senior Moment? Try resting in a darkened room with a cool damp cloth over your head. See ya soon...
Your poem revolves around the integration of artificial intelligence (AI) in creative processes, particularly in writing and poetry. The poem personifies technology, specifically a virtual assistant named "Orry" (or Copilot), and explores the relationship between human creativity and AI support. It raises questions about the role of technology in art and the extent to which it can enhance or replace human expression.OMG, Dave, three weeks ago, Copilot would not let me log in to my laptop, so I had to uninstall it!
The agony of it all...................................😅😂😂
🤣Well, at first I was like What the Hell? Then I said Fxxk this, you will not win with me!👍😂👌
That's all your own work, I think....👍😂Smells about right........
Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never did. My bad! Chalk it up to the spotty internet I had this past weekend. This feels like a cheeky employee review of the office AI, but beneath the charm is something more… uncanny. You’ve captured the strange intimacy we’ve developed with our digital assistants...half helper, half ghost in the shell. A playful and pointed piece, Dave. You made me grin and squirm. 🌹👏
I believe you are receptive to the overall story and the direction in which it is focused, Tristan... but squirming is no solution....
Keep on truckin'....
'See you at your next piece, or the one after...
Oh...I love to squirm. It's why I go on thrill rides and the like! 🤣 Though at my age, I am starting to need to be wheeled off after the squirming! See you then, my friend. Be well!
😂Well focus as an alternative strategy....
Fair enough! 🤣
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