We have all lost pieces of ourselves along the way
Some broken and discarded, some stolen, others forgotten at end of day
Parts taken, pieces missing often leave scars or a hole
We cling to remnants of a damaged soul
There are pieces we give to others that live and some to those long dead
Part of ourself given as a gift, a piece of us spread
When you give yourself to others, give your best piece, the one you most cherish
What you release, you will never miss, that gift of your piece will never perish
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a wonderful sentiment. I have given away a few things in my life and the joy it brought others is far more important than the loss I might of had A clever and wise poem. I'm learning something new every day. In fact this poem is a major gift to all
Thank you David for your continued support and encouragement. Your reading of my poems is always most anticipated.
A good writing tho sad .. I think often we can have parts of ourselves that can feel very hurt / or yesh wounded .
I can sometimes feel like I’ve lost parts of me or that I’ve lost myself ( sad really
I like your words anyway especially the last lines about those parts we cherish
Thank you for your read and kind comment it is most valued
I really like this. A very thoughtful, and well crafted poem. Distilling ideas of giving and having bits taken, but it's far from superficial. Makes me introspect and think deeply. I personally think it never perishes because the act of giving ultimately brings greater reward.
Thank you so much Jeremy for your review of this piece and your encouraging words they are most appreciated. You are so right it does not perish for this and that someone else may pass it down to others as well.
I have always got so much more pleasure out of giving than recieving, lovely write, enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani I appreciate your comment and attitude. Would that there were more people like that.
You are very welcome
Your poem revolves around the notion of loss and the act of giving oneself to others. It reflects on the pieces of ourselves that we lose over time—whether through experiences, relationships, or the passage of time—and how these lost fragments shape our identity. You emphasize the beauty and significance of sharing parts of ourselves with others, suggesting that the act of giving can lead to emotional fulfillment and connection. seeks to encourage readers to embrace the act of giving pieces of themselves to others, the poet suggesting that while we may lose parts of ourselves, the act of sharing can lead to deeper connections and a sense of purpose. It invites reflection on the beauty of vulnerability and the importance of cherishing the connections we make throughout life.
Thank you Friendship for the read and interpretation that is spot on. Giving a cutting of ourselves to someone else ensures that a piece of us lives on in new growth planted in new ground.
Excellent write
Thank you very much Tony it is most appreciated
You're welcome
Beautifully said, Soren. There’s something deeply human in the way you frame loss...not just as suffering, but as offering. That final line especially struck me…giving our best piece so that it endures. Quietly profound, my friend. Thank you for this. 🌹👏
Your words are most comforting and kind my friend I thank you for that.
You are most welcome, my friend.
The sacrifices of life, be they large or small so that others may possess and benefit from that which offered, be that at the expense, pain or a gift of the benefactor. It's the kindness and the essence therein that is humanity. Of those who have lost, that is, out of kindness have been found in the rewards of the recipients. A wonderful poem in all. Composed with insight and compassion. Very well done, Soren.
All the very best,
Tony.
Thank you Tony your words mean a lot and are deeply valued. A great day to you as well.
Beautifully captures the quiet pain of loss and the deep meaning behind giving of oneself. It's heartfelt, reflective, and leaves a lasting impression. Very well written!!!!
Thank you so much Salvia for your understanding and kind words of support.
Tremendous work, my friend.
Thank you Thomas your words are most valuable
Beautifully said my friend, the gift of giving returns to us a hundred fold. Thank you for this lovely contemplation!
Thank you Bella for your support and kindness it is always an honor and pleasure when you visit.
This is all our experience in life soren and you cannot teach experience.
Andy
Thank you Gold for your words and review as always most appreciated
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