The Road To Here And There
the road to nowhere
must begin somewhere
the road to anywhere
always begins everywhere
if in doubt of direction
find your spot elsewhere
then follow your feet
where your nose leads you
the road to dinner wear
ends in frozen Tupperware
the road to Delaware
travels here and there
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revisited version:
The road to nowhere must begin somewhere
the road to anywhere always begins everywhere
If in doubt of direction sniff the wind for silver linings
then follow faithful footsteps where quiet grace is shining
the road to dinnerware ends in frozen Tupperware
the road to Delaware skirts old towns and shoreline fair
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: August 2nd, 2025 02:27
- Comment from author about the poem: ...just a little weekend silliness from late primary school days.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Damaso
Comments8
A fun read Cryptic just remember that the road to underwear leads people to stare
Good one! Good enough to βsteal!β Thanks Sorenππ»ποΈ
My pleasure have a great day
You too, just got out of a 12-hr shiftβ¦ so tired π΄
This entertaining read is describing the highway of my life, enjoyed the read
Thanks, glad it entertains ποΈππ»
It does and you are very welcome
Thanks for the Fave π€© @CM
No problem, my pleasure, you're more than welcome... I'm not up to speed as much as I'd like, thanks to too much third shift and now 12-hr shifts of the same. Thank you, rather, for sharing.
same here, 12-hour shifts are the worst... but then again... we scrape by, thanks kindly ππ»ποΈ
Hope either or both works in your reading!
Both work, but my favorite is the 2nd. I'll try to comment later more fully.
Oh, good to know! That will help along my learning curve ππ»ποΈ
So much fun today. Good write, arqios.
Thanks Jerry, most appreciated ππ»π
We all have followed a road to be where we are now arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy, and that\'s where we are today ππ»ποΈ
Your rewrite elevates the original to unforeseen heights until a playful poem becomes a nearly breathtaking thing of beauty, incorporating the ideas with an extraordinary twist. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
That is so encouraging to read, thank you again. ππ»ποΈ
You are very welcome.
Thanks Damaso for the Fave π€©
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