Introspection

Teddy.15

 
I went to see
my reflection
  in the water 
and I was blinded
by the sun
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  • sorenbarrett

    Ah Teddy this one can be taken many ways and is deeper than surface value. So short yet so thought provoking. Loved it a fave

    • Teddy.15

      My spirit is alive and well because no one can keep a good gal down. My moping was brief I'm moving on. šŸ¤— Thanks for your ever compassion my dear sorrenbarret. 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome my friend

      • Priya Tomar

        So deep, so wise , short but sharp
        Lovely !

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you so much dear Priya, lovely to see you once again ā¤ļø

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          YESSSS! This is mystical. The introspective person is always examining oneself. Therefore, as your poem suggests and your comment confirms, they already know themselves far more than one looking at their reflection on water or in a glass mirror. Hear hear, to that! And this poem says more than just that. Rock on Teddy.!This is a fave for sure, my dear friend. šŸŒ¹šŸ‘

          • Teddy.15

            Sending you all my love dear Tristan, thank you for your kindness and compassion 🌹

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              You are so welcome, Teddy. My love is sent to you as well!

            • arqios

              Superb!

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dear Arqios 🌹 it has been a rollercoaster of a week but I'm back. 🌹

                • arqios

                  Good to have you back dear Teddy šŸ•ŠļøšŸ™šŸ»

                • ElizabethMoroz

                  Beautiful

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you dear Elizabeth welcome to my page. 🌹

                    • ElizabethMoroz

                      Thankyou Teddy, I’m looking forward to reading your work, the piece you wrote was so delightful and multifaceted, rich in imagery and laden with meaning. Well done on a beautiful composition. Elizabeth šŸ¦‹

                    • MendedFences27

                      Beautiful! Very introspective, thought provoking and artful. I'll never face myself in the water again. - Phil A.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Dear Phil, Face it and you too will see nothing but the sun. šŸ¤—

                      • Tony Grannell

                        Hello Teddy,

                        Short, sharp, shock; a eureka moment in the blinding glare of your own reflection. I am who I am and happy with my lot and so you should be. The poem is as petit as it is powerful, like a firecracker going off. Excellent.

                        Kind regards,

                        Tony.

                        • Teddy.15

                          Dear Tony, I love your review, thank you dear Sir. 🌹

                        • Thomas W Case

                          Tremendous work, sweet Teddy. You bring it to life....vivid and sharp.

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you so much dearest Thomas. 🌹

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Fine words Teddy, but you will soon see the beauty of your reflection as I do.

                            Andy

                            • Teddy.15

                              I am already there dearest Andy, that's why I see the sun, thank you. It's been a very traumatic and revolutionary week, but I have realized the love of my blood relatives that I have always fought to have will never be, so now I am no longer going to be sad. 🌹

                            • Damaso

                              Beautiful seems simple but keep a great metaphora with its message inside. Thank you very much for octar. Kind regards

                              • Teddy.15

                                Thank you so much dear Damaso. 🌹

                              • NafisaSB

                                wow and wow again - short, sweet and so beautiful...
                                meanwhile enjoy your holiday and come back with some more beautiful verse

                                • Teddy.15

                                  My dear NafisaSB, you are really beautiful, and yes I hope to come back refreshed and with some new lines of scribbles. 🌹 🌹

                                  • NafisaSB

                                    thanks - stay happy and blessed, and come back inspired..
                                    all the best always



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