A sudden hum, a darting threat,
My open door, your chance you met.
From outside in, a tiny dread,
A nasty critter, in my head.
For hours, I chased, with effort grim,
You danced and zoomed from limb to limb.
So hard to catch, so quick, so slight,
You filled my home with weary fight.
You spun and zipped, a buzzing stress,
A tiny torment, nothing less.
My patience strained, my temper thin,
But no, I vowed, you would not win!
At last, a moment, swift and true,
The outside called, you finally flew.
Go on, you pest, with wings so slight,
Fly, nasty critter, out of my sight!
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- Published: July 17th, 2025 06:43
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Bee of wasp or whatever I don't like uninvited pests inside. A metaphor per chance? I don't like them inside my head either. A read that explores how we react with the uninvited and how we feel relieved when they are gone. Nicely done
Sorenbarret, thank you so much for your comment.
What is remarkable is that such a tiny creature can end up annoying us, pestering us. It appears that the whole human abilities cannot be harnessed to catch that thing. It keeps darting from place to place.
Soman Ragavan, Thank you so much for your support comment; you are so correct. Those tiny, pesky little flies can get under our skin, yet there is no way of catching them.
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