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The Sun has returned
Thank you
The Sun has returned
Loving Hate.
Hate Slowly Eats Away Inside
Creating Open Wounds, Relentless Pain it Thrives
Love Instead Keeping Humanity Alive.
Tobani June 2024
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Loved the rhyme and the idea it rolls off the tongue in its flow. Nicely done.
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Lovely rhyme...
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Yeah man some hate is truly unjustified esp when it comes from perpetrators, victims are justified to hate their tornentors
Kudos to this fine poem.
Thank you for your feedback, by continuing to hate you continue the torment, enjoy the rest of your day
Strange how only the living know pain as far as we can attest. But it can be differed from as well. Much thinking to follow. 🕊️🙏🏻
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That's so powerful. The contrast between love and hate so raw and real.
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🔥🤯💨. This is fire! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Tobani, this is seriously sharp and stripped bare...exactly how truth often lands. Your first line holds so much…and the final turn toward love isn’t just hopeful, it’s necessary. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹👏 Bravo! This should have endless faves imho! If I could fave it more, I would, I'd make a day of it! Bravo!
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Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. It was an eye-opener when I finally began to learn that I am the one who suffers if I don't forgive and/or hate the other individual. Lovely reminder.
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Very true Tobani, love can solve all problems.
Andy
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