The magic show

sorenbarrett

Life a magic show, we appear out of nothing
For the eye too quick 
Diversions from what is coming
Knowing but not wanting to believe it's a trick
Reality a slight of hand
Hidden, it lies out of sight
A trap door and a mirror we don't understand
An invisible thread we don't see in a card's flight
Smoke and mirrors takes away our fears 
Clouds our eyes to reveal a surprise
In a box cut in half
In a disguise, illusion parted lies
In clap and laugh lies our epitaph

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  • Poetic Licence

    All the magic ingredients of life, and most of them we do not see until its to late or never at all, enjoyed the read

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Tobani for your read and comment. Yes most of us want to be fooled.

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • Friendship

        Well written. Your poem seems to reflect the unpredictable nature of life. The Magic Show" revolves around the illusionary nature of life, suggesting that our existence is akin to a magical performance where reality is obscured by deception and trickery. The poet explores themes of perception versus reality, the fleeting nature of time, and how we cope with the unknown. The poet's matter includes references to magic tricks—like sleight of hand, hidden elements, and illusions—metaphorically representing the complexities and misdirections of life.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you Friendship for your insightful interpretation and comment it is as always most appreciated

          • Friendship

            You are very welcome.

          • Tony36

            Excellent write

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you very much Tony for your review it is most appreciated

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • Priya Tomar

                We always fear of harsh reality and want to live in illusions....
                Very well

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much for your read and comment yes we all want to be fooled.

                  • Priya Tomar

                    You are most welcome.

                  • Jeremy Leach

                    Another interesting read and more than superficial depth. I really liked the writing style and the parallels drawn. It's interesting because the simulation hypothesis believers out there would very much lean towards us being in a magic show. I keep an open mind.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much for the read and comment. Yes I see it in metaphor they see it in reality.

                    • Neville



                      Near been there sure done that and bloomin worn the T shirt out .. Nice words & that's an understatement .. Write on brother S .. N

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you so much Neville your words always mean a great deal. Always loved illusion and used to do a few tricks sometimes tricking myself. The best tricks are the ones that fool oneself and when asked how did you do that you can honestly say I don't know it just happened.

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Fantastic work

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you Thomas it is appreciated

                        • arqios

                          Thinks vanish as if by magic and likewise other things materialise by the selfsame mystery, a confounding life reveal!

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you Cryptic for the review and comment it is most appreciated

                            • arqios

                              Most welcome Soren

                            • Neilton

                              Such a great poem with a deep philosophical approach!! You nailed it once again!!!

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you Neilton I appreciate your support and encouragement.

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Very true soren and that magic is with us all our life.

                                Andy

                                • sorenbarrett

                                  Thank you Andy for your review and comment it is valued

                                • Tristan Robert Lange

                                  Soren, you play brilliantly with perception. The rhythm is tight, but it’s the tension underneath...the knowing and not-wanting-to...that I really found to be killer (in a good way). You pull the curtain just enough... and leave us staring into the trap door. 🌹👏 Beautifully done.

                                  • sorenbarrett

                                    Thank you Tristan for you read of this piece. Life is like magic once you know the secret it looses its charm. I appreciate your comment my friend

                                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                                      You are most welcome, my friend. 🖤♰🦇🪞🩸🕯️

                                    • gray0328

                                      Well done Soren I enjoyed the concept of the poem

                                      • sorenbarrett

                                        Thanks so much Gray it is appreciated



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