Life a magic show, we appear out of nothing
For the eye too quick
Diversions from what is coming
Knowing but not wanting to believe it's a trick
Reality a slight of hand
Hidden, it lies out of sight
A trap door and a mirror we don't understand
An invisible thread we don't see in a card's flight
Smoke and mirrors takes away our fears
Clouds our eyes to reveal a surprise
In a box cut in half
In a disguise, illusion parted lies
In clap and laugh lies our epitaph
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All the magic ingredients of life, and most of them we do not see until its to late or never at all, enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani for your read and comment. Yes most of us want to be fooled.
You are very welcome
Well written. Your poem seems to reflect the unpredictable nature of life. The Magic Show" revolves around the illusionary nature of life, suggesting that our existence is akin to a magical performance where reality is obscured by deception and trickery. The poet explores themes of perception versus reality, the fleeting nature of time, and how we cope with the unknown. The poet's matter includes references to magic tricks—like sleight of hand, hidden elements, and illusions—metaphorically representing the complexities and misdirections of life.
Thank you Friendship for your insightful interpretation and comment it is as always most appreciated
You are very welcome.
Excellent write
Thank you very much Tony for your review it is most appreciated
You're welcome
We always fear of harsh reality and want to live in illusions....
Very well
Thank you so much for your read and comment yes we all want to be fooled.
You are most welcome.
Another interesting read and more than superficial depth. I really liked the writing style and the parallels drawn. It's interesting because the simulation hypothesis believers out there would very much lean towards us being in a magic show. I keep an open mind.
Thank you so much for the read and comment. Yes I see it in metaphor they see it in reality.
Near been there sure done that and bloomin worn the T shirt out .. Nice words & that's an understatement .. Write on brother S .. N
Thank you so much Neville your words always mean a great deal. Always loved illusion and used to do a few tricks sometimes tricking myself. The best tricks are the ones that fool oneself and when asked how did you do that you can honestly say I don't know it just happened.
Fantastic work
Thank you Thomas it is appreciated
Thinks vanish as if by magic and likewise other things materialise by the selfsame mystery, a confounding life reveal!
Thank you Cryptic for the review and comment it is most appreciated
Most welcome Soren
Such a great poem with a deep philosophical approach!! You nailed it once again!!!
Thank you Neilton I appreciate your support and encouragement.
Very true soren and that magic is with us all our life.
Andy
Thank you Andy for your review and comment it is valued
Soren, you play brilliantly with perception. The rhythm is tight, but it’s the tension underneath...the knowing and not-wanting-to...that I really found to be killer (in a good way). You pull the curtain just enough... and leave us staring into the trap door. 🌹👏 Beautifully done.
Thank you Tristan for you read of this piece. Life is like magic once you know the secret it looses its charm. I appreciate your comment my friend
You are most welcome, my friend. 🖤♰🦇🪞🩸🕯️
Well done Soren I enjoyed the concept of the poem
Thanks so much Gray it is appreciated
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