My Raven came, he came a'tapping
on window pane
whilst I was napping
he came to me, to tell a truth
that I should not remain recluse
he told me there's a world outside
a life that's full and there's no strife
he told me I should rise from slumber
so I did, and now I wander
mind can see, mind can touch
seek the sun, I love so much
smell the roses red as cherries
collect in basket all the berries
found a truffle in the ground
touched the salt in ocean's mouth
next time I take a restless nap
I'll surely wait for Raven's
tap.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'm on holiday apparently my muse is not. 🐦⬛
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 22
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Bella Shepard, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange, NafisaSB
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Comments9
Glad to hear your poems again. So glad the raven tapped again. Nicely done Teddy
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret always and forever grateful you are by my side 🌹
Most welcome Teddy
I enjoyed this, nature tapping on the window reminding us there is still so much to see and savour, nicely written
Most humbled by your words dear Poetic Licence, thank you so much. 🌹
You are very welcome
Good write, Teddy. I feel like I was there. Wish I were.
Ah but you are if you see it you will feel it too. Thank you dear Jerry. X
Your beautiful poem has that "holiday" vibe to it, relaxed and comfortable. Thank you for sharing these lovely thoughts, hope your holiday is great!
My dear Bella, thank you so much, I'm currently away for summer, I shall catch up very soon with your return 🌹 X
Beautiful. I love it.
Thank you dearest Thomas, I am incredibly humbled when you pass by, I will be back soon to return the enormous priveliage you always give me. X 🌹
Your life is there for you to enjoy Teddy, every moment is wonderful that is why your raven keeps tapping.#
Andy
Thank you my dear Andy. Sending loads of hugs to you and Mary 💜💜
Hello, Teddy,
You started off with Poe's raven and then the poem became your own, bringing us on a journey, lush with roses, cherries and a basket full of berries as you make your way down to the sea. Just lovely. Thank you very much for inviting us along.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
Thank you so much dear Tony for such a lovely review, the Raven may be my all time favourite poem, it has brought a gigantic mass of inspiration to my scribbles. I love the lines you have highlighted, thank you, I'm most humbled you have come by today. 🌹
Beautiful! Another one of my faves! What a wise raven indeed! Stately and wise! Love this, dear Teddy! Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛ (5 Ravens for this one)
🤗 thank you my dear Tristan, I'm still away for a few days but will be back in the clan very soon. So happy to share these scribbles with you my dear friend. 🌹
so glad to know your muse is alive and kicking - and so inspirational. lovely verse - enjoyed reading it
Thank you so much dearest NafisaSB 🌹 humbled that you like my scribbles so much. 💜
you are always welcome - and hope to see much more from your side
take care
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