Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
The original cream porcelain slip
was initially thrown
around seventeen fifty and fired
by all account maybe
five whole years later in a small
almost forgotten lost
mountain village wood fuelled kiln ..
Today, both the jug
and bowl maintain near perfect
form and integrity
just as they did during the entire
manufacturing process ..
Yet still they showcase the beauty
of blue bamboo shoots
all set against a backdrop of three
gold leaf cranes in flight
and a shower of chrysanthemum
now resting comfortably
upon the white veined black marble
flagstones of my recently
renovated ensuite bathroom floor ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: some things speak for themselves ..
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Comments8
There's a reason I left visual art for words, as you've too capably proven herein, for while any rendering of the same would have been pretty, I never could have cherished it as much as I do this. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and an almost exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
You are just too good to be true Missy ..
Fine words Neville showing that some things change for the better and many do not.
Andy
If its not broken best leave well alone .. cheers Andy
A fine write N.
And now my next poem, 'Portrait of an old boot' (or old trout). I will include a pic of KP with the poem. Heehee.
I'm a naughty guinea pig rodent. She'll feed me lettuce. They can't have it, as it gives them the trots. But they can have cabbage and grass.
Sometimes, less is more .. I think this is one of those occasions ..
Too much info from me there?!
Some works of art are fortunate enough to be appreciated by their owners to be kept in pristine condition through generations, passed down from one to the next. Valuable even in the beginning they grow in value with age, but they require a discerning eye and a careful hand in a culture that has appreciation for them. Stunning images Neville and yes some things do speak for themselves without the need of metaphor
What a lovely review .. thanks tons my friend .. Neville
Always my pleasure Neville and I hope you are doing well
That's a wonderful description of a beautiful piece of japanese pottery which is clearly valued as it should be,a thing of beauty. The gold crane is sometimes used to cover a repair, but this sounds in perfect condition, I hope the cranes deliver what they represent happiness and longevity, enjoyed the read
You have a good eye and a big heart my friend .. thank you kindly ..
You are very welcome
Your poem "Portrait of an Old Jug and Bowl" is a testament to the timeless allure and exquisite craftsmanship of porcelain artifacts, masterfully juxtaposing their historical significance with their contemporary presence in a personal space, inspiring reflection on the passage of time, the artistry involved in their creation, and the way objects can retain their elegance while serving functional roles in modern life.
I really can't thank you enough my friend .. your well reasoned & invariably generous words never fail to put a smile on my face ..
You're so welcome, my friend,
Well done, Neville. I was standing there looking at that Jug and Bowl. Good chat.
Cheers Jez .. Neville
Excellent write Nevilie
Well I neva .. Cheers
You're welcome
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