Notice of absence from Poetic Licence
They Think It Is All Over.
Sad to say it is now.
Take Care.
They Think It Is All Over.
Sad to say it is now.
Take Care.
Chocoholic.
Can I have that bag of Malteser’s.
I would be your best friend for life.
If you gave me that bag of revels.
You could even share my wife.
Now if I had that bar of Dairy Milk.
That would really top things it off.
If you throw in that Cadbury's creme egg.
Then you can have everything I've got.
Tobani July 2025.
Man From Mars.
The man said he had arrived from Mars
That he had to travel very far
When we looked further into this
It turned out he was from the planet Twix.
Tobani July 2025.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of weekend fun, have a good one
- Category: Humor
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Two nougat nuggets for the poetic sweet tooth. Sugary fun for everyone. Loved them Tobani but like all such bites they ended too quickly
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You are most welcome my friend and a wonderful day to you as well
Thank you
I love the humor! The first one is playful and the funniest.
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You welcome!
Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of humor rolled into rhyme. You had me from Choco...the holic part just is a given! 🤣 Fun little snapshots, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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You are most welcome! You too!
Nothing like a sweet tooth! 🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day, while i still have them they will remain sweet!!
You too. May the sweetness of the weekend be with you as well🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you
I enjoy your humor, but I do not like Cadbury's Creme Egg. Yet I do love me some candy at times, have a great weekend.
They are my number one, Thank You for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
Oh my!!! Tidily rendered in rhymed couples with such irresistibly hearty humor, it's too good! Laden with expert imagery and a waltzing poignancy, oh, I love, love, LOVE it!!! Thank you so very much for sharing.
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Rhymed couplets. Sorry about the typo. Thank you again.
As a recovering choca"o"holic I can enjoy the thought, the smell and the tase of chocolate vicariously in this wonderful poem. Now the planet Twix sounds like a great place to vacation. I shall have sweet dreams tonight. Thank you!
It's a pleasure to help with those dreams. Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
........................ Sweet .. very sweet .. and funny too .. I came close to being addicted to Maltesers many years ago .. bring back Aztec bars ... again, I say .. N
Thank you .Have a great day
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