There is A Crease in Everything

Neville

There is A Crease in Everything

 

There is a crease in everything

that’s precisely what trips one up

   and stops us all from getting in ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 17th, 2025 03:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: another one from Looking Back on Burned Bridges .. still widely available within our solar system .. why not make yourself glow from the inside .. buy a copy for someone you love even more than yourself .. its all for a good cause .. Neville
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 108
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Poetic Licence, Tristan Robert Lange, Demar Desu, Friendship, Alan R, Meera Mere
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Forsooth, good Sir. La dee. How beautifully you've taken a provocative topic and addressed it generously in brevity. Charming. After that, I'll feign giving up since the breadth of that topic is too large. Thank you very much for sharing.

    • Neville



      I quite like a bit o brevity now n again .. thanks for noticing Missy .. Neville

      • Cheeky Missy

        My pleasure, you are welcome.

      • arqios

        I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that “crease” as both imperfection and barrier. It reads like an unfinished riddle, inviting you to lean in and imagine what lies beyond the snag. The spareness leaves the echo doing the work. 🕊️🙏🏻

        • Neville


          Got me smiling all over my face so you have arqios .. ta muchly ..

        • sorenbarrett

          Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In this world outside of inflation there is little increase.

          • Neville



            Too bloomin write you are sir .. and cheers .. Neville

            • sorenbarrett

              You make me smile Neville hope you are doing okay

            • Poetic Licence

              The connations and interpretations of this write could be vast, I will just say Genius, enjoyed the read

              • Neville



                .. Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss bless ya 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍

                • Poetic Licence

                  You are very welcome

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does that. Powerful and precise. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                  • Neville



                    Many thanks again Tristan .. 😎💛🐦‍⬛🌻🐈‍⬛👍

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      You are most welcome, my friend!

                    • rebellion_in_sanity

                      Somewhere it leaves us suspended...zipped thoughts, yet not tangential. Enjoyed it very much 🙏

                      • Neville



                        Brill and I just can't thank you near enough r_i_s .. and the fact you just used one of my favourite words 'tangential' desreves each of the following x5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

                      • orchidee

                        Now KP got several creases cos her botox melted! lol.

                        • Neville



                          You crease me up sir & no kidding ..

                        • Friendship

                          I could very well be off on this,,, To me, your poem serves to inspire readers to embrace their imperfections and consider acts of kindness—such as sharing literature—as a means of fostering love and support in their lives.

                          • Neville



                            there's never an off, not in my book dear Friendship .. in fact, you got really warm .. thank you as ever .. Neville

                          • Dan Williams

                            Solid observation simply stated. Nice.

                            • Neville



                              Thanks tons my friend ..

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Those creases can be so time consuming Neville.

                              Andy

                              • Neville



                                just try and ignore em .. they won't go away but at least you wont get repetitive eye strain and a crooked neck

                              • NafisaSB

                                your comments resonate with me though the poem is short , sweet and tells the tale you wish to convey

                                • Neville



                                  Then the whole thing was worthwhile .. thank you & kindly .. Neville

                                  • NafisaSB

                                    yes - was glad to read it - and look forward to many more ..



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