Father for us did provide
When small in his shadow we did hide
On his strength we did depend
Complete compliance we had to extend
We find God in want and hunger
A he, odd not a she, old not younger
Loving only us, all others are foes
Always forgiving of our anger and blows
A nation sends us to war
that is if we are the poor
Beat our chests that we're the best
Enemies and heathens all the rest
Father, God, government, nation
Holy protectors of control's preservation
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As I'm someone who does not believe in religion and who never had a dad on her side, this strikes many cords. Beautifully wrapped into another great piece of wisdom 🌹
Father's, God, Nation all symbols of authority demanding absolute compliance with not questioning. Most step from one to another without thinking. Thanks for the read Teddy and the kind words of support.
I wasn't sure if this was a tongue in cheek statement, or a statement of how it should be, I'm in the first option camp, enjoyed today's offering
So perceptive Tobani deliberately written to be taken either way it leaves the door open to the reader but at the same time those things that are that ambiguous are also the ones that the fiercest battles are fought over.
I got one right!! That has made me smile
Do we call God as a last resort, when maybe we should be calling him at the start?
As long as the big man is looking down on me, I'm quite happy.
Well written poem about power and authority.
A fun to read it.
Thanks so much about the read and interpretation. Yes indeed it is you nailed it. Your words are most appreciated
Soren, this one cuts sharp…father, God, and nation all woven as figures of authority demanding submission. The rhythm makes the critique hit even harder. It reminds me of Marilyn Manson's "The Love Song", where he screams ""Do you love your guns? (Yeah!) / God? (Yeah!) / The government?" (Fuck yeah!)". This poem shares a similar kind tone and critique that I really value. Strongly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much Tristan for your interpretation that strikes close to my initial thoughts in writing it. In minds evolution the first authority figure as a babe is the father then God and lastly the nation or kin group we belong to. All demand subservience. Layers of demanded conformity that stifel the individual that can not be tolerated. Your words are most appreciated.
Indeed. You are most welcome, my friend! A powerful poem!
Your poem explores the complex relationship between authority figures—Father, God, government, and nation—and the individual's dependence on them. It critiques the notion of blind obedience to these entities and highlights the paradox of seeking protection and guidance from them while simultaneously recognizing their potential for control and oppression. Yet the poet aims to provoke thought and discussion about the nature of authority, highlighting the importance of questioning and critically engaging with the systems that govern our lives, rather than accepting them blindly. It serves as a commentary on the human experience of navigating power dynamics.
Thank you Friendship for your insightful interpretation of this poem and understanding of the eilema of authority. It is most appreciated
I couldn't help but press the fave...
You are very kind. Thank you for the read and kind words
That reminds me the good old days !
'' Work .Family . Country '' .
Indeed we were sold on that at the time and now look back in nostalgia
I've neva really been one for authority figures .. or wars .. maybe that's why I have followed a Buddhist path ever since I was a teen .. wonderfully well worded sir
Feel pretty much the same way Thanks for the read and comment my friend have a great day
Wow, incredible! I really enjoyed it. A beautiful balance of contrasts between its conflicting ethical and moral contradictions. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
Thank you so much Damaso for your read and most kind words of encouragement they are most appreciated
Dear Soren,
Confucian paternalism, came to mind when reading this - the benevolent rulers, loyalty and obedience above all else to the detriment of individual freedoms as is still the case and not alone in China. Another poem to untangle as you draw the reader ever closer in to your unique and wonderful style. That brain of yours is still in good working order.
All the very best,
Tony.
Thank you Tony it was just a few months ago that I was reading the Anacleto of Confucius as you so keenly observed in this write and I had not placed myself. I deeply appreciate your read and comments my friend.
I'll pay that one, Soren.... you know which one, but why the need for ambiguity?
Thanks Dave I'll take the opening bid. Ambiguity is always good, it allows more room for thought.
Made me think.... nah.... got my own thought journeys to take....
I know the my Spirit is there for me but in no way would I be involved in organised religion.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy for the read and comment it is most valued and I think that many would agree
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