Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
rainbow arcs criss cross
watercolour puddle skies,
migrating bird skeins ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: taken from the first draft of 'A Nuance for Old Times Sake' .. as yet unpublished ..
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A fine write N. here's my Haiku, or ditty, as a gloom-and -doom merchant. It's probably not strictly a Haiku, but it is 5.7.5.
Feeling gloomy - rain?
Cheer up, all will soon be good
More rain tomorrow!
Don't knock it, that's cool .. Neville
Thank you N. But if ya are happy, I'll soon ruin it for ya! lol.
Beautiful image for a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
Blimey, is it that time already .. I got to get my skates on .. it'll soon be autumn & I've got a hospital appointment to keep .. Thanks HUGELY .. Neville
You are very welcome
A beautiful picture that seems like I've seen before in my life. Nicely crafted Neville
Keep your chin up and I'm pretty sure you will see it, or indeed them again .. Thanks ever so much sorenbarrett 😎👍
My pleasure Neville
You painted a beautiful painting this morning. Resplendent Skies, a Haiku in Flight Mode, radiant arcs elevate watercolour puddle skies, migrating bird skeins soar with promise
You always add a touch of colour even on the greyest of days .. thank you so much my friend .. Neville
You're most welcome, my friend,
Ah, but how adroitly is it? you pack such delicious imagery into this itty bitty form until I go half wonky trying to make something of it. Charming, very charming, but of course. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and an undefined poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Half wonky will always do it for me and gets my vote every time .. bless ya little cotton socks Missy .. Neville
A beautiful picture, perhaps a "watercolor"? All three lines relate to create the scene. The "migrating birds" set the time of year. Nicely done. - Phil A.
I'm so glad you could see it my way Phil .. many thanks y friend .. Neville
Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be wells and warm promises.
Well, well, well, thanks muchly Neville
Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery. Sorry, I am so late in dropping by, my dear friend…crazy day. Well done! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
You got here and that is what matters to yours truly .. the fact you smiled down on my little scribble is a real bonus .. Cheers brother .. Hope today is less crazy .. 😎🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧👍
You are most welcome! Thank you!
Very good Haiku Neville.
Andy
You are a little golden wonder .. 😎👍
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