A lion from its ambush sees the lamb on open ground
How quickly, predator life does squeeze from prey with no sound
A snake's tale falls from the nest, awaiting returning dove
Inside coiled is the rest, expect no mercy from above
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Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
Very observant my friend. It does indeed have layers of meanings one of which could indeed be present state of affairs. You might also note archetypal symbols or biblical ones. Thanks so much for your read and understanding words they are always appreciated
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
Thank you so much Cryptic for your read and interpretation. Yes this was the initial inspiration seeing a dried snake skin hanging from a dove nest. Your words are most appreciated
Oh wow, that’s a powerful writing prompt!
nature in its cruelty but honesty
Thank you so much for your review it is always most appreciated Norman
most welcome
Your poem "Traps" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
Thank you Friendship for your read and interpretation that indeed is the intent of the poem it is most apreciated my friend.
You're so welcome, my friend.
Well written, Soren.
Thank you Jerry for your review and kind words they are most appreciated
Good write SB.
Thank you Orchi for the read and support it is appreciated
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there's a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
Thank you so much for the read and interpretation it is deeply appreciated
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy for your review and fond wishes. We all need to eat.
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
Thank you so much Salvia for your review and interpretation it is most welcome
It's always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
Thank you again NinjaGirl for taking the time to review this poem and for your comment. Yes beware the smooth talkers.
Haha, yes, it's always truly a pleasure to read your poetry
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