As fate would have it
sometimes i get myself
into situations, that are really bad
but on very rare occasions
the hole I'm in
is just so damn bright.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My title is meant to be Hole it's used on purpose, poetic licence moment . Sometimes bad things lead us to the very best of everything. 🌹
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
Love the word play in the title my friend in fact I like it a hole lot. I was picturing the hole in the hole to be a whole lot bigger to let light in. A most fun read Teddy that also is psychological and philosophical if one digs deep enough into that hole.
Thank you dearest sorrenbarret I'm a hole lot humbled by your gorgeous words. 🌹
Fun write, Teddy. With a lot of truth hidden.
So very kind of you to say dear Jerry, thank you dear friend. 🌹
Teddy, I loved this. The wordplay in the title makes the whole poem sing—sometimes even the holes we fall into blaze with light. That’s life, isn’t it? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So very well done, dear poet and friend!
We must all remember this, holes can also bring light. Thank you my dear Tristan. 🌹
Indeed they can. There’s nothing like a good, Ol’ fashioned paradox! You are most welcome, Teddy!!!
Light is always there for you Teddy.
Andy
Always thank you dear Andy. 🌹
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