I am delicate
I flourish and bloom, when loved
my life, short but sweet.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Senryu syllabus 5/7/5 object, emotion.
- Category: Reflection
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A wonderful write Teddy and I guess you and I were on the same pathway today both writing about roses. Well don my friend
Well you were my inspiration so thank you dear friend, I wrote this after reading yours which is stunning. 🌹 Thank you my lovely sorrenbarret 🌹
That is a great compliment and you are always welcome. My pleasure
Beautifully done, Teddy. You’ve captured the fragility and grace of life itself in just a breath of verse…and wow, synchronicity between you and Soren today. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Too short, can't begin to count the number of roses we've enjoyed and lost to time!
Beautiful senryu Teddy.
Andy
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