Moulding Life.

Goldfinch60



Life can be like moulding clay,

It can change in every moment

As the clay is pushed into shape.

Once you think it is ready

It can be fired into permanency

And never change again,

Unless it is broken.

But if we fix our lives like that

We may miss the better shapes,

The better shapes of our life.

So never put your life into a fixture

As the wonder and glory of our lives

May still be waiting for us.

Waiting for us each moment we allow.

Each moment we allow change.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2025 01:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: The group in the video we saw on stage last night at the hotel where we are for the weekend.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. 'If it ain't broke, don't fix it!' I say to KP. It would save her hundreds of pounds not having botox. lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very true Orchi

    • Teddy.15

      Lovely concept. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Teddy.

        Andy

      • Michael Edwards

        Full of messages that all hold true - gets a star from me.

        • Goldfinch60

          Much appreciated Michael.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          A good analogy Gold my clay seems to be never fired and changes day to day. I guess the day I die will be the day it is fired. A very nice poem Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true soren, the same with me.

            Andy

            • sorenbarrett

              Most welcome my friend

            • Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice

              I love the metaphor of life as clay flexible, ever-changing, and full of potential. The poem beautifully reminds us to stay open to growth and possibility, and not rush to fix our lives too soon. It’s inspiring and reflective.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you for your kind and understanding words Petra.

                Andy

              • arqios

                So much change and so much possibilities in life, Andy! 🕊️🙏🏻

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very true Rik, the possibilities are endless. Thank you.

                  Andy



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