Gently

sorenbarrett

Death comes in gentler days crawling on padded shadows
It creeps like the shade of night taking hold of all
Blanketing hills and valleys, river and seas
None escape its muffled grasp

 

In an instant snatching away startled prey to comfort in its arms
Quieting the frightened babe with whispered lullabies 
Darkness enfolds the weary soldier
Broken mother, babe bundle of bones

 

A graveyard nursery where misery sleeps calmly
Each stone marking planted dreams
Rocked to sleep in forgetfulness
A tender kiss takes them home

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  • Michael Edwards

    Now this has got to be one of the best I've read in some time. I will print it out and keep it with my collection.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much for your most kind words my friend they are cherished and most valued.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows, whispering lullabies, planting dreams in stone. You’ve written the paradox with such quiet power, Soren. Beautifully done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you my friend for your kind review of this piece. It is most encouraging hearing your words of support and that is appreciated.

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          You are most welcome, Soren! My pleasure!

        • orchidee

          Good write SB.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Orchi appreciate it

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful words soren, death cannot be avoided but it can come and be wonderful.

            Andy

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Andy for reviewing this piece and your understanding words. They are as always appreciated

            • RSM0812

              Very descriptive with amazing imagery. Well done.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much for your read and kind words they are always appreciated.

              • William Hromada

                Oh so quiet it can slip in. Sometimes it just rips you apart. Beautiful put…..

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much for the read and kind words they are most appreciated

                • Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice

                  Stunning writing — death is a sad part of life, dark
                  This piece is lyrical, and unforgettable. Beautifully written.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you Petra for your review of this write. I believe death is only sad for those that don't understand it and the cycle of life. Your support and encouragement is always most appreciated.

                    • Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice

                      🙏🏻You are welcome 👍🏻 well I don’t think I ever will understand death. It’s a hard pill to swallow. You have a very interesting point of view & no problem.

                    • NafisaSB

                      such a tender and beautiful representation of a grim reality
                      - kudos

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you Nafisa for your reading of this poem and your understanding comment it is deeply appreciated

                        • NafisaSB

                          ALWAYS APPRECIATIVE OF GOOD WORK - KEEP IT UP

                        • Tom Dylan

                          A fine, thought-provoking write, Soren. Nicely done.

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks so much Tom I appreciate the read and comment



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