When shopping for transportation one needs to consider the situation
Does one have to buy, does one lease or will a rental fly
Some buy on impulse, an act of passion, others prefer a purchase of fashion
Do you want flashy; or economical, dependable though a bit trashy
Would you take a car that's used, what of one that has been abused
Would you take a used loaner from a generous donor
Would you buy direct from a previous owner one that has outgrown her
Would you want it to have been maintained, can the seats be stained
How many miles are too many, does the engine need to be a Hemi
If buying new, how many miles until the term used it does accrue
Would you take the salesman's advice to accept blemishes to lower the price
If interested only in appearance, would you take a year end clearance
How much do you want to spend; price, maintenance, a warrantee to extend
What options will you use, are you paying for something abstruse
Is there a place to keep it safe, or will it be hit on, stolen or the weather chafe
Will you lend it or share it with others, trusting in their druthers
How many miles will you drive this beast, alimony paid to an lease priest
If all this you do forget you'll make a purchase you'll soon regret
After all this confusing talk, as for me, I think I'll just walk
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So witty and true — sometimes walking really is the best option😊
Thank you so much for the read and kind words they are most appreciated. Yes in both ways a purchase presents buyers remorse
Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard truth under the shine. The humor hits, but the insight sticks. Excellent work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks so much my friend for the read and understanding. Everyone seems more interested in Uber these days.
The poem explores the complexities and considerations involved in purchasing a vehicle, using it as a metaphor for broader life decisions and relationships. The speaker ultimately reflects on the pressures and confusion of consumer choices, leading to a humorous conclusion that walking may be the simplest option.
Thank you friendship for the interpretation that indeed applies. Whether partners, friends, cars all applies.
Good write SB.
Thank you so much Orchi appreciate your read
A difficult question...I'll take a used car, thrifted clothing, and a top-of-the-line quality man! It will never be one or the other. Very well-written, I enjoyed reading...a deepened experience for sure.
Thank you NingaGirl for your read and response. Any way a person chooses I respect their decision but I think it should be fully informed.
Purchase what you need not what you desire soren.
Andy
Indeed tis true. Thanks for the read and comment my friend
That's an interesting poem.
Everything is for sale, and ultimately, we are for sale too, even if it goes unnoticed
Thank you very much for your read of this piece. Yes we pay a price for everything we say or do and for those we choose to affiliate with. I appreciate your comment
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