Could Not Afford You.

Goldfinch60



They are all over the place,

Those antique shops,

But I do not go in them

As at my age they may sell me.

I said this to my Mary

And she replied,

“They couldn’t afford you.”

What a wonderful thing to say,

Proving the strength of our love.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2025 02:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: I said this as a joke to Mary but when she replied with "They couldn't afford you" I thought this was such a beautiful thing to hear.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Teddy.15

    Awe bless her, and yes you are priceless dear Andy. 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Teddy, thank you.

      Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      That's lovely - what a great thing to say.

      • Goldfinch60

        Yes I thought it was so great Michael. thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Yes, we are quite old, you and I - millions of years old! lol. If we got to Antiques Shows, do they think we are exhibits?

        • Goldfinch60

          Very true Orchi, thank you.

        • sorenbarrett

          A joke where an unexpected incongruity or incompatible combination evokes laughter becomes an expression of love when responded to with an unexpected twist that reverses the meaning of the first statement. This requires a quick wit and deep perception as well. Lovely Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            So kind soren, thank you.

            Andy

            • sorenbarrett

              My pleasure

            • arqios

              heritage listed, most likely! 🕊️🙏

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Rik.

                Andy



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