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sorenbarrett

To set a footing on a cloud, a sunbeam ladder to the sky
A nest in heaven your goal, why do you set your sights so high
Rock bottom, a solid foundation upon which to build
Not pinned to rainbows or castles in the sky, but sweat spilled 
From dirt poor, poured around the corner stone to affirm
Adversity's diversity, solid building blocks, toughness confirm
Between rock and a hard place, cuddled by what is stone rough
Mortar of mixed scabs and blood, stone scars will make your building tough

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Online Online)
  • Published: November 16th, 2025 03:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    A fine write SB. Yes, I started at the bottom, I was climbing a ladder and the first rung was broke, so I fell back to earth! lol. KP asks me - you telling porkies there?!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much Orchi for the read and support. Nothing worse than a ladder with broken rungs unless it's a singer with no lungs.

    • Michael Edwards

      You need a foundation which is sturdy and sound
      and though you might try
      You can't reach for the sky
      if your feet are not firmly stowed on the ground

      • sorenbarrett

        Ah thank you Michael there you go an answer in poetic form indeed. I appreciate the kind words my friend.



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