hello poetry
Beneath the rustling of an unwritten page,
a quiver begins—soft as rain on glass.
Words lean toward each other,
testing the air between syllables,
like strangers exchanging glances
before they dare to speak.
Here, the ink is not just ink—
it is breath, the slow unfurling of a thought
that has waited years for its own voice.
Every line a bridge, every pause a doorway.
And when the poem finds you,
it does not knock—
it slips into your chest,
settles beside your heartbeat,
and ripples outward from it.
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 17th, 2025 05:12
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A fine write A. it's my saying again 'I never knew there was so much to (x), but I know now!' and in this case 'x' being 'writing a poem!' Glad you rustled those pages and got your quill out to write. Quill? Well, I am millions of years old, with Goldfinch too, so I say. heehee. He won't be insulted by saying we're both very old.
Keep quilling! ๐ชถ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Me quill's gone blunt. I'm chasing this bird around the garden, hoping to pluck one of its feathers for a new quill. lol.
Homemade ๐ชถ quills; now thereโs a time-forgotten skill! ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
It sure does, and when it's down and the page is a picture, all is good.
It's when you're in company and the thoughts come through, what do you do.
Oh, thatโs so true! An awkward attempt to make a note in the presence of others. Holding a thought is far too difficult. Itโs almost the same challenge as when asleep and a poem comes to you! ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
This is like fine wine. Brilliant.
Many thanks, Thomas๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Poetic thoughts put to ink. I find may a poem breaks in through a closed window or door forgotten unlocked to find it sitting on my bed or in my shower. Startling me out of what would be a quiet day and ordering me to the laptop. Seldom do they come whole but in handicapped form, some without feet, body or heart. A wonderful write my friend.
Aye, thatโs the way of the poem. Its mysteries are quite wonderful. Thanks, Soren๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Most welcome Cryptic
My friend, this moves with such reverenceโฆink as breath, pauses as doorways, a poem slipping into the chest instead of announcing itself. You wrote the inner life of creation with real grace. Beautiful work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
Thanks, T. Far too many times the inner life of creation remains unseen. ๐คฉ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Now I find this poem reaches into my lungsand produces a gasp, almost like Ted Hughes' "Thought Fox" did the first time I read it. Super writing, thank you!
Thanks, FrasMac. May we have many more good turns and returns๐๐ป๐๏ธ
When the Poem starts coming together you are like Victor Frankenstein: 'Its Alive! Alive!
Now I have a videoclip playing in my head! ๐คฃ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
So many poems in our minds Rik, so little time to write them all down.
Andy
That is so true< Andy. Makes one wonder what percentage of them "make it to print." ๐๏ธ๐
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