I have traveled from the river Stix to the Elysium gardens I graduated from kindergarten
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Exquisite three lines with a fully lived life in between them, Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you Teddy I'll soon be ready to start school. Appreciate your read and comment my friend
Yes id say 🤣
Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi I appreciate your support my friend
That’s quite an academic career there, Soren! 🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you Cryptic yes it has only just begun. Now comes the hard stuff.
Profound and powerful. Love it! Thanks for sharing sorrenbarrett!
Thank you Katie for your read and kind words of encouragement
This poem reflects on a life journey, drawing a metaphorical line from the mythological underworld (the river Styx) to the idyllic afterlife (Elysium) and highlighting the innocence of childhood (kindergarten) as a foundational stage of this journey. The journey of life is a continuous educational experience, suggesting that every stage—from childhood to the afterlife—is part of an ongoing learning process.
Thank you Friendship for the read and interpretation. Indeed it is a journey and hell to heaven just the preschool of what is yet to come
You are welcome, my friend.❤️
Did you get your little square hat the kids now get leaving kindergarten.
So much schooling, never enough time.
Thanks so much Paul for the read and comment. Yea the square hat indeed for a block head. Now I got the rest of school ahead.
Probably why I got expelled early. lol
Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch! It's the like the one-liner of poems, but not cliché in the slightest! Brilliance! Oh...and congrats on graduating! 🤣 All jokes aside, this is absolutely a fave, dear Soren! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks so much Tristan for the review and comment yes life is a kindergarten from heaven to hell then we get to start school
You are most welcome, my friend!
" cultivate your Kindergarten ! '' Says the master !
Indeed tis true
Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I'm told) legislated the first in the world (I'm told) ban on social media for children under the age of 16. The world (I'm told) is watching and may, (I'm told) follow suit. Fair warning? Hate to see you left high and dry without at least some form of contingency plan, Soren......
It's okay Dave you can't believe anything on the internet anyway so nothing lost. Thanks for the read and comment my friend
I don't - not even round here.......
Especially!!
Enjoy your journey soren.
Andy
Thank you Andy since we can not avoid the trip we may as well enjoy it.
Life's odyssey is cosmic and childlike.
Thank you so much for the read and comment it means a great deal
And still learning all the time.
Fine Three lines.
Thanks so much Kevin it is most appreciated
There is harmony in such a short write, I like it a lot. Nicely done SorenB.
Thank you very much Adam your words are most valued
Superb creation my dear🙏🙏🙏💙💙💝
Thanks so much my friend for the read and words of encouragement they are most appreciated
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