My Dreamworld Tanka.

Goldfinch60



Love rules all our lives

In the world of which I dream,

All help each other

Bringing joy and love to all,

In the world of which I dream.

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  • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

    Sounds like a good time

    • Goldfinch60

      It will be Demar, thank you.

      Andy

    • Michael Edwards

      Nice one Andy = I do like this form

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, yes I use it quiet a lot.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

      • sorenbarrett

        A lovely dream Gold where things are as they should be not as they are. Loved it

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind soren, thank you.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            You are always welcome Andy

          • Jerry Reynolds

            A wonderful dream, Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              Much appreciated Jerry, thank you.

              Andy

            • NafisaSB

              Amen. Wish your dream of such a world will come true someday

              • Goldfinch60

                So do I Nafisa, thank you for your comment.

                Andy

                • NafisaSB

                  if wishes were horses...
                  let's hope though



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