Amendment

Doggerel Dave

It’s ‘No Kings’ there in the U S of A;

Citizens on the street will have their say.

An amendment needed before it sings:

For the rest of the world it’s ‘No Mad Kings’.

 

In this remote corner of the planet, far away from hostilities, I use public transport. Lucky I’m no car owner.

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  • Jerry Reynolds

    A fine write, Dave. Timely, the protests are on.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Thanks, Jerry. And I'm off - to bed!

      • Doggerel Dave

        ...And in the cold light of day, it doesn't appear to be getting any better, does it?

      • Michael Edwards

        If only no Kings - will he wear a crown when the real King visits?

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Dave, that turn into “No Mad Kings”…that’s the line that really lands. It flips the frame and gives the whole piece its edge. Strong piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Doggerel Dave

          Thanks Tristan. At one time I struggled for every line in my pieces and then some. These shorties just pop into my head almost complete and unadorned. Strange...

        • sorenbarrett

          I sometimes think it would be better if there were a king but not the one that thinks he is one. It would give the public something to look forward to beheadings at weekly football games, that would sell a lot of products especially if it were restricted to kings that were not popular. As for cars you are fortunate I guess but that means living around a lot of people to get public transportation.

          • Doggerel Dave

            Cheers Soren. Not worried about my personal situation here - just the price of petrol; a hint one could, I hope, feasibly interpret to mean the cost of all fuel, which would include trucker's diesel plus general manufacture. This then results in increased prices of goods and services everywhere.

            • sorenbarrett

              I agree we are all paying too much.

            • Doggerel Dave

              Thanks for your input, Michael Edwards.

            • Kevin Hulme

              I do a lot of Walking. Prefer to use the Train when needed as the Local Buses are filthy. Windows covered in Dust.
              A timely Write.

              • Doggerel Dave

                Thanks Kevin for a quick sketch depicting the texture of your life. I think this crisis (for that is what it is) touches most people one way or another. I've just been shopping; my food bill has risen considerably.

              • Neville



                Don't get me started .. why don'tcha .. No gas & I hate orange .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

                • Doggerel Dave

                  No doubt where you stand with this one...😜

                  • Neville


                    like I said .. don't get me started 🧡😠

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      I will try with all the self control I can muster...

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Such true words Dave.

                      Andy

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Thanks Andy.

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          That England of yours, where I was born and lived for a while has had it's fair share of mad kings, hasn't it? so I suppose you could argue that I speak with a somewhat tenuous authority....lol

                        • Thomas W Case

                          Sharp and witty—your lines cut through pomp and pretense.
                          A clever, gritty reminder that power only holds as long as we let it.

                          • Doggerel Dave

                            'Trouble is, right now I'm not quite sure where relief will come from. I have a terrible feeling this is going to take a long time to work out for the U S and the world.
                            Thanks for your support, Thomas.

                          • orchidee

                            Dunno why I've turned up here. Sir Orchi NS to the rescue. What rescue? Dunno - a mad moment! No change there then from me. lol.
                            A typical NS comment. You knows him, Sir Orchi. If he got nothing useful to say, he will say it anyway. And he will always use 50 words when 5 will do. Heehee.
                            He keeps taking the tablets, but - Oh, I dunno, they don't seem to make any difference. lol.

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Oh you poor fella, orchi - you have to find an outlet somewhere. Given world shortages everywhere, wooden crosses are in all probability in short supply. I use the term 'probability' to denote some uncertainty as really this is not an area of expertise which is mine. You just carry on like a two bob watch if it makes you feel better. Time will move on, the situation will ease - a couple of days or so will pass and we all know where Houdini got his inspiration from... and no more wooden crosses for another year....☺️

                              • orchidee

                                Yes, a two bob watch. Also he's like a 9 bob note, that Sir Orch NS. (We used to have 10 bob notes in the UK, you may know). Or as rare as a 4 quid note (We have 5 quid notes in the UK).

                                • Doggerel Dave

                                  Well thanks, orchi for giving me the lowdown on the currency available within your sceptered isle.. Should I buy here in Australia, or wait 'til I get there when I come over to sort this matter out?

                                  • orchidee

                                    I'll flog ya plenty of those 9 bob and 4 quid notes! lol.

                                    • Doggerel Dave

                                      Never thought of you as an entrepreneur, orchi. You have hidden depths.



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