Haiku (an ode to spring)

Teddy.15


 
 
spring leaps into light
 
  frog hopping from Lilly pads 
 
 dancing graciously.
 
 
 
 
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  • Priya Tomar

    So beautiful .

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much. 🌹

    • Paul Bell

      Finally, I can take a layer of clothes off, spring has sprung.
      Don't know why the people in ASDA are laughing at me though.

      • Teddy.15

        They are laughing at you because you are actually in marks and Spencers 🤣

        • Paul Bell

          Oops.

        • sorenbarrett

          Nicely said my friend. I like the word play with spring as the season and jumping of the frog. Well done

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you dear sorrenbarret I've got a think for haiku at the moment so humbled you have enjoyed my dear friend. 🐸

            • sorenbarrett

              Most welcome 'Teddy

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Teddy, there’s a gentle energy in this that really lands…the movement, the light, that small moment of life returning. The image of the frog ties it all together so naturally. It feels like stepping into spring itself. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dearest Tristan, I'm hopping from one Haiku to another 🤣 big hugs my friend and thank you for your lovely words. 🌹

              • Kevin Hulme

                #Its the Most Wonderful time of the year#.
                Not Christmas but Spring.
                Good Write.

                • Teddy.15

                  I'm currently growing my own basil, yes the spring is in full bloom now, thank you dear Kevin. 🌹 🌷

                • Thomas W Case

                  Brilliant and beautiful, sweet Teddy.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you my dear Thomas. Sorry I'm not as round as much at the moment. 🌹

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Super haiku Teddy.

                    Andy

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you dear Andy. 🌹

                    • Poetic Licence

                      Love the uplifting feel to this write, dancing graciously is a lovely line as spring lightens all our moods in preparation for the party of summer, enjoyed the read

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you so much dear Poetic licence, I've seen some beautiful blue skies on the UK news this week, here it's also heating up. I'm so glad you have enjoyed. 🌷

                        • Poetic Licence

                          A pleasure

                        • NafisaSB

                          beautiful poem, and beautiful pic - thanks for sharing and making me look forward to a day as bright as the scene...

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you for brightening mine 🌹

                            • NafisaSB

                              You are one of my favorite poets - keep them coming and more power to your imagination and your pen 🖊️✌️💅



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