With eyes
That never smiled
Two drinks inside
Late to arrive
Takes a seat
In corner cover
He lost a bride
Once a lover.
The old coat
About to weep
To look beyond
Free of sleep
A bridegroon without
A bride in white
Haunted still
About that night.
Returned home early
In time to find
His wife and best man
Bodies entwined
Took a drink
And then another
Never stopped
His soul to shudder.
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Author:
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: An old poem written many years ago about a man just married who discovered his best friend and best man with his wife. He took a drink and never stopped always presenting a lost and lonely figure. He is obviously dead now but the story is a true one
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Comments5
Betrayal is a bitter pill to swallow it often catches in one's throat and doesn't go down and when it does it an make one sick. Well written Norman
thanking you always appreciated
Most welcome Norman
Feels like it was overly real for him that day. ποΈπ
it was I never forgot him, the most solitary man Ive ever seen, thanks for read appreciated
Most welcome dear friendποΈπ
Good write N. And now your next poem: 'Without a bus'. lol.
a bus with no wheels lol
lol
Norman, this hit me hard. There is a quiet sadness running through it that never lets up. By the end, you really feel the weight this man has been carrying for years. Powerful piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
as always much appreciated, many thanks for reading
Such an awful situation Norman.
Andy
yes indeed, thanks for read much appreciated
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