hellopoetry

arqios

 

hello poetry

 

 

 rustling beneath an unwritten page,

a quiver begins—soft as rain on glass.

Words lean toward each other,

testing air between syllables,

like strangers exchanging glances

before they dare to speak.

 

 

Here, ink is not just ink—

it is breath, a slow unfurling of a thought

that has waited years for its own voice.

Every line a bridge, every pause a doorway.

 

 

And when the poem finds you,

            it does not knock—

  it slips into your chest,

settles beside your heartbeat,

and ripples outward from it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Mutley Ravishes

    Heartfelt, Arqios!

    • arqios

      Much obliged, Mutley. Thanks๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

    • sorenbarrett

      Very nicely said I particularly love the last stanza that feels so right. Well done my friend

      • arqios

        Glad to hear about the final stanza. Thanks Soren๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

        • sorenbarrett

          My pleasure my friend

        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

          lovely write

        • Thomas W Case

          This beautifully captures that eerie moment when a poem seems to exist before the writer actually gives it words. The final image is damn strongโ€”the poem doesnโ€™t knock or ask permission; it slips inside and starts beating with you.

          • arqios

            Yes, both within and without. All over like a pan-poetic existence. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

          • Kevin Hulme

            Just about sums it up.

            • arqios

              thanks Kevin ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

              • Kevin Hulme

                My Pleasure.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Wow, Arqios, I absolutely love this. Poetry emerging from silence, words slowly discovering one another, thoughts finally finding their voiceโ€ฆthen the finished poem quietly entering another person and rippling outward. That captures something deeply true about why poetry matters to me. Beautiful piece, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

                • arqios

                  Let's keep making poetry matter ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                • Goldfinch60

                  Such treu words Rik, poetry is formed in a myriad of ways.

                  Andy

                  • arqios

                    A myriad shards of light!
                    Thanks Andy๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ



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