Wet Words.

Goldfinch60



The words of poems can be hard to form

And sometimes not at all

But why do words come to my mind

As I enter the shower stall!

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 24th, 2026 00:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: Words can come to you in the most bizarre places.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 55
  • Users favorite of this poem: Syd, Cheeky Missy, A.N.
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  • Teddy.15

    LOL that also happens to me very often. 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes it is so silly Teddy when words come and we can not write them down. LOL

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold. lol.

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      So true my friend, its the attempt to remember that drives me crazy

    • sorenbarrett

      Good one Andy things just sound better in that shower acoustics be it poem or song

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you soren, much appreciated.

        Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          My pleasure Andy

        • Syd

          Hi Goldfinch, this is very relatable. Especially when driving, showering, shaving or some other mundane task. I actually read it's something to do with how the brain works. If you sit down to purposefully write then...nothing!

          - Syd 🍄

          • Goldfinch60

            So very true Syd, thank you for your comment.

            Andy

          • arqios

            The mind and soul relaxes when the pen and paper is replaced by the shower and shampoo 🧴 🚿 🧼 🖊️ 📝🙏🏻🕊️

            • Goldfinch60

              So very true Rik, thank you.

              Andy

            • Cheeky Missy

              Funny, showers are most oddly the places where inspiration seems to dance freely, dunno why.

              • Goldfinch60

                Yes, that is so true CM. thank you.

                Andy

              • Doggerel Dave

                Waterproof slate and wax crayon permanently installed in shower?

                For me, just as I'm in the twilight state between wakefulness and sleep. Unmotivated, the masterpiece lost forever.....

                • Goldfinch60

                  Fine idea Dave but as you say those masterpieces can be lost in various times.

                  Andy

                • Thomas W Case

                  Good stuff.

                • NafisaSB

                  Agree with your comment dully. I get inspired exactly in places where am unable to pen my thoughts to words many a time.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Nafisa.

                    Andy

                    • NafisaSB

                      You are always welcome 🙏🏼



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