Candy Bars

sorenbarrett

Removing a wrapper of seduction there lay a heart of obstruction
The sugar coating on the kiss melted into bitterness
A sweet delectable taste became a sour revolting waste
Two mounds on top that looked about to pop
A top seller at her game, bitter chocolate was her name
A rounded butt, all hiding a brain that was a nut

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  • Paul Bell

    Come into my web said the spider to the fly.
    Men will go into that web in a minute, and we know why.
    Does that make us dumb, desperate, not saying.
    It's a fav.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much Paul I do very much appreciate your take on this piece. Yes we often think with the wrong end in mind and better men than I have been taken down that rabbit hole.

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      Femme fatale



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