WIDE AND DEEP FEELING FROM MY HEART
I BELIEVE THAT U R THE WANTS THROUGH INSIDE MY SOUL PART
YOU ARE THE ONE WHOM MY HEART WANTS PROTECT ME,LOVE ME AND CARE ME
BUT
HEART LIES SOMETIME,EYES CRY INSIDE
SOUL BE APART...................SOMETIME
I HAVE FORGETTEN THAT
WHY SKY AND EARTH ISN'T TOGETHER?
WHY STAR COMES AT NIGHT WHILE THE SUN SHINE IN THE MORNING?
AND
WHY ROSE AND THORN CANNOT STAY TOGETHER?..............................to be continued
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Author:
aviksha (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 22nd, 2010 03:56
- Category: Love
- Views: 53
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Comments3
Aw....I look forward to the rest of it.....thorns are part of roses and sky and earth make one whole, neither seems to be without the other.....we fly high in one and creep along or dig deep into the other....those are my initial thoughts.
Then again, considering the title, it is a sorrowful love longing...hopeless.
Very interesting.....I do look forward to more.
thank u my friend(SAATHI)FOR all ur comment ............it drives me towards sucess in my life................................
Uff... well I love happy endings...
but with the ones we hope to hold some love...
you never know...
waiting for it...
THANKS MR.JORGE G SIFUENTES FOR U COMMENT AND POEM RATED...............................
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