Night Time Whispers

dbremner

I heard your voice

Carried through the night

And in the darkness

It moved my heart

 

From a dream, I woke

And felt your presence

But you weren't with me

It was just your voice.

  • Author: dbremner (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2010 15:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Aw, it is so sorrowful for it begins hopefully but concludes emptily. But happy endings are vain dreams half the time anyway. It is like what you say, earnestly at a grave when you cannot bear the loss. Therefore it seems bittersweet. 4,5,5,4 and 5's.......I dunno how to properly rate it so you shall have to forgive me if the mark is too low.
    But of course, I like this piece.



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