I heard your voice
Carried through the night
And in the darkness
It moved my heart
From a dream, I woke
And felt your presence
But you weren't with me
It was just your voice.
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Author:
dbremner (
Offline) - Published: November 25th, 2010 15:09
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Comments1
Aw, it is so sorrowful for it begins hopefully but concludes emptily. But happy endings are vain dreams half the time anyway. It is like what you say, earnestly at a grave when you cannot bear the loss. Therefore it seems bittersweet. 4,5,5,4 and 5's.......I dunno how to properly rate it so you shall have to forgive me if the mark is too low.
But of course, I like this piece.
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