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Vortex of Love

In a moment

This thing will claim us

For we stand tonight, my love

On the edge of forever

 

So quickly

Before the whirlpool takes us

Smile once more - Like before

And follow me into the vortex of love.

Comments2

  • Cheeky Missy

    Yes, I like this one very well! It has a passion to it, that I can almost feel the handclasp as the "we" in the poem stand on the edge of the whirlpool to plunge into that exciting unknown of "FOREVER"....and I like the symbolism of vortex for the love! It is a delightfully passionate love poem!

  • Kri2arch

    That well said



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