In a moment
This thing will claim us
For we stand tonight, my love
On the edge of forever
So quickly
Before the whirlpool takes us
Smile once more - Like before
And follow me into the vortex of love.
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Author:
dbremner (
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- Category: Love
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Yes, I like this one very well! It has a passion to it, that I can almost feel the handclasp as the "we" in the poem stand on the edge of the whirlpool to plunge into that exciting unknown of "FOREVER"....and I like the symbolism of vortex for the love! It is a delightfully passionate love poem!
That well said
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