In the final hour
Of the day
They fell
Deep in to
Each others arms
Deep in to
Each others heart
And deep in to
Each others love
And from that depth
A depth known only
To them - Not others
They vowed
They would never rise.
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Author:
dbremner (
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- Category: Love
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Comments1
And they kept it too, right?! And lived happily ever after in a love that none had known before.......! I like it very well. It is delightfully romantic and sweet. I like how the lines are arranged....it gave me the sense of the falling and depth, just looking at it descending on the page, like the first stanza, where every succeeding line is shorter than the previous, you know what I mean?
They kept it!
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