Hoween94

Love's Dispare

What is the point if you give and get nothing,

Life is Pointless,

Love is pointless,

Love... is a funny thing,

You laugh, you cry, you.... love,

The butterflies when you see him,

The dispare when he's gone,

Love is a funny thing....

But in my life there is none.

Comments2

  • dbremner

    I think it is well thought out and well written.

    • Hoween94

      I will pass that onto her, and hopefully she will create an account to publish her other poems as I think she is very talented.

    • Cheeky Missy

      It is very interesting. I find I cannot justify it as love if I am demanding, though. Let Kim know it is a very nicely written piece. I like it.

      • Hoween94

        i will pass it on.



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